El jue, 21-05-2009 a las 17:00 +0200, Thorsten Wilms escribió: > On Thu, 2009-05-21 at 14:06 +0200, daniel planas armangue wrote: > > I created some Banners to help spread the Breathe icon set in first > > relase. Hope you like and comment or submit your ideas > > Quite nice. > > I think you should use "Breathe Icon Set" as headline on Banner.png, > too, to clearly say what it is. > > The reflection of the folder on dark background doesn't look right. It > ends too sharp and there seems to be a trace of green that shouldn't be > there. > > A subtle warm tint of the background gradient could make it look > friendlier while still keeping it sharp. > > You should drop the quotation marks "" from the slogan, because they > don't add meaning but are rather distracting. > > The icon collection could benefit from more space between the icons,but > you would have to make the banner larger, then. > > > -- > Thorsten Wilms > > thorwil's design for free software: > http://thorwil.wordpress.com/ >
At the moment I am collecting all suggestions for improving my designs. please any idea is welcome. in that moment i'm working on 8 or 10 posters for Breathe Daniel.P -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
