Hi,
in my opinion you should remove the mirrored circles ( the lower ones)
on the front, as that makes it look too complicated. Furthermore Tux
doesn't have to do anything with the Ubuntu brand, so I'd remove that, too.
And, most important to me would it be to use the Ubuntu logo without the
white background, but with the circle of friends in orange.
Did you take a look at the Ubuntu brand guidelines, they might be quite
helpful: http://design.canonical.com/the-toolkit/ubuntu-brand-guidelines/
Keep up the work
Alex
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