>From a copywriter's perspective, David's suggestion looks good. My own 
>preference would be to simplify the sentence slightly and use 'at times' 
>rather than 'in some places', i.e: 
'This picture will be associated with your user name and displayed alongside it 
at times.'
It is subjective, of course. This suggestion is probably a bit friendlier 
because it's a little less precise - and I think it will make more sense to the 
novice user.

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