Hi Milo,

I've taken a look at your article and it's looking good so far. Could
you make a few small changes, though?

 * Use <orderedlist> instead of <itemizedlist> for the instructions starting on 
line 23
 * Use capital letters to start each <listitem>, e.g. <listitem><para>Choose 
&computer;</para></listitem>
 * 'Cake charts' are more commonly known as 'pie charts' in most English 
speaking countries

I checked your patch for basic-commands too, and it looks like nixternal
committed it a few days ago.

Thanks for all of your work!

** Changed in: ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu)
       Status: Confirmed => In Progress

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