hi.. as i mentioned earlier the one line explanation of 'ifconfig' command was unnecessary is basic commands section as it has been explained in detain in the networking section. so i have created a patch after removing that particular part.
i've attached the patch.. Regards Vignesh.... I'm a free man... I use free software.... ----- Original Message ---- From: Phil Bull <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: Sunday, April 13, 2008 4:20:30 AM Subject: [Bug 215441] Re: Grammatical errors found in desktop-effects.xml Feedback on TR: https://lists.ubuntu.com/archives/ubuntu-doc/2008-April/010679.html ** Tags added: techreview -- Grammatical errors found in desktop-effects.xml https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/215441 You received this bug notification because you are a member of Ubuntu Documentation Project Team, which is subscribed to ubuntu-docs in ubuntu. Status in Source Package "ubuntu-docs" in Ubuntu: Confirmed Bug description: The following contains grammatical errors found under the categories 'compiz-intro', 'compiz-configure', and 'compiz-problems' from desktop-effects.xml for Hardy. Compiz-intro - [desktop more fun and easier to use.] I think it should be reworded 'desktop fun and easy to use'. - [Visual effects are enabled by default] As far as I know, visual effects are not enabled by default. Correct me if I'm wrong, but the default is no visual effects. - [users of computers with certain] Somehow, I don't think the statement 'users of computers' makes sense. The sentence should be reworded. - [or cause the computer] Should be reworded 'or they may cause the computer'. Compiz-configure - The directions at the beginning to open up Appearance should be italized. - It is often quicker to open up Visual Effects through right-clicking the desktop background. Perhaps this should be mentioned. Compiz-problems - Again, the navigating should be italized. __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam protection around http://mail.yahoo.com ** Attachment added: "unnamed" http://launchpadlibrarian.net/13408729/unnamed ** Attachment added: "diffname.txt" http://launchpadlibrarian.net/13408730/diffname.txt -- Grammatical errors found in desktop-effects.xml https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/215441 You received this bug notification because you are a member of Ubuntu Bugs, which is subscribed to Ubuntu. -- ubuntu-bugs mailing list ubuntu-bugs@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-bugs
