I haven't read the whole patch through, but I strongly disagree with the first proposed change (changing "This chapter discusses the benefits of using Ubuntu and why you might like to switch to using it on your computer." to "This chapter discusses the benefits of using Ubuntu and why you might like to switch it on your computer.") as that really doesn't make any sense, or sounds like a little clumsy English...
A doc guru should review this. -- Tech Review Report for whyswitch.xml https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/219806 You received this bug notification because you are a member of Ubuntu Bugs, which is subscribed to Ubuntu. -- ubuntu-bugs mailing list ubuntu-bugs@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-bugs
