Author: philbull
Date: Tue Aug 28 00:41:11 2007
New Revision: 4299

Modified:
   trunk/ubuntu/basic-commands/C/basic-commands.xml

Log:
Corrections to tense (patch from David Delony), added statuses to sections

Modified: trunk/ubuntu/basic-commands/C/basic-commands.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/ubuntu/basic-commands/C/basic-commands.xml    (original)
+++ trunk/ubuntu/basic-commands/C/basic-commands.xml    Tue Aug 28 00:41:11 2007
@@ -90,14 +90,14 @@
     </para>
    </sect1>
   
-  <sect1 id="files-directories-commands">
+  <sect1 id="files-directories-commands" status="review">
     <title>File and Directory Commands</title>
 
-    <sect2 id="cd">
+    <sect2 id="cd" status="review">
       <title>cd</title>
       <para>
-       The <command>cd</command> command will
-       allow you to change directories. When you open a
+       The <command>cd</command> command 
+       changes directories. When you open a
        terminal you will be in your home directory. To move
        around the file system you will use 
        <command>cd</command>. Examples:
@@ -147,14 +147,14 @@
        </itemizedlist>
     </sect2>
 
-    <sect2 id="pwd">
+    <sect2 id="pwd" status="review">
       <title>pwd</title>
       <para>
        <command>pwd</command>: The 
-       <command>pwd</command> command will allow
-       you to know in which directory you're located
-       (<acronym>pwd</acronym> stands for "print working
-       directory"). For example, typing 
+       <command>pwd</command> command will show 
+       you which directory you're located in 
+       (<acronym>pwd</acronym> stands for <quote>print working
+       directory</quote>). For example, typing 
        <screen>pwd</screen> in the <filename 
class="directory">Desktop</filename>
        directory, will show
        <computeroutput>~/Desktop</computeroutput>.
@@ -167,10 +167,10 @@
       </para>
     </sect2>
     
-    <sect2 id="ls">
+    <sect2 id="ls" status="review">
       <title>ls</title>
       <para>
-       The <command>ls</command> command will show
+       The <command>ls</command> command shows
        you the files in your current directory. Used with
        certain options, you can see sizes of files, when files
        where made, and permissions of files. For example, typing 
@@ -179,10 +179,10 @@
       </para>
     </sect2>
 
-    <sect2 id="cp">
+    <sect2 id="cp" status="review">
       <title>cp</title>
       <para>
-       The <command>cp</command> command will make a
+       The <command>cp</command> command makes a
        copy of a file for you. For example, type: 
        <screen>cp file foo</screen> to make
        a exact copy of <filename>file</filename> and name it 
<filename>foo</filename>, but the file
@@ -190,10 +190,10 @@
       </para>
     </sect2>
 
-    <sect2 id="mv">
+    <sect2 id="mv" status="review">
       <title>mv</title>
       <para>
-       The <command>mv</command> command will move a
+       The <command>mv</command> command moves a
        file to a different location or will rename a file.
        Examples are as follows: 
        <screen>mv file foo</screen>
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@
       </para>
     </sect2>
 
-    <sect2 id="rm">
+    <sect2 id="rm" status="review">
       <title>rm</title>
       <para>
        Use the <command>rm</command> command
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@
       </para>
     </sect2>
     
-    <sect2 id="mkdir">
+    <sect2 id="mkdir" status="review">
       <title>mkdir</title>
       <para>
        The <command>mkdir</command> command will
@@ -238,7 +238,7 @@
   <sect1 id="sys-info-commands" status="complete">
     <title>System Information Commands</title>
     
-    <sect2 id="df">
+    <sect2 id="df" status="review">
       <title>df</title>
       <para>
        The <command>df</command> command displays
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@
       </para>
     </sect2>
 
-    <sect2 id="free">
+    <sect2 id="free" status="review">
       <title>free</title>
       <para>
        The <command>free</command> command displays
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@
       </para>
     </sect2>
 
-    <sect2 id="top">
+    <sect2 id="top" status="review">
       <title>top</title>
       <para>
        The <command>top</command> command displays
@@ -271,7 +271,7 @@
       </para>
     </sect2>
 
-    <sect2 id="uname">
+    <sect2 id="uname" status="review">
       <title>uname</title>
       <para>
        The <command>uname</command> command with the 
@@ -282,7 +282,7 @@
       </para>
     </sect2>
 
-    <sect2 id="lsb_release">
+    <sect2 id="lsb_release" status="review">
       <title>lsb_release</title>
       <para>
        The <emphasis role='strong'>lsb_release</emphasis> command
@@ -301,7 +301,7 @@
       </para>
     </sect2>
 
-    <sect2 id="ifconfig">
+    <sect2 id="ifconfig" status="review">
       <title>ifconfig</title>
       <para>
        The <command>ifconfig</command> command reports on
@@ -310,7 +310,7 @@
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
 
-  <sect1 id="elevated-privileges">
+  <sect1 id="elevated-privileges" status="review">
     <title>Executing Commands with Elevated Privileges</title>
     <para>
       The following commands will need to be
@@ -320,7 +320,7 @@
       for information on using <command>sudo</command>.
     </para>
 
-    <sect2 id="add-group">
+    <sect2 id="add-group" status="review">
       <title>Adding a New Group</title>
       <para>
        The <command>addgroup</command> command is used to create a
@@ -330,7 +330,7 @@
       </para>
     </sect2>
     
-    <sect2 id="add-user">
+    <sect2 id="add-user" status="review">
       <title>Adding A New User</title>
       <para>
        The <command>adduser</command> is used to create new users on
@@ -352,7 +352,7 @@
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
 
-  <sect1 id="options">
+  <sect1 id="options" status="review">
     <title>Options</title>
     <para>The default behavior for a command may usually be
       modified by adding a 
@@ -375,7 +375,7 @@
     </para>
   </sect1>
 
-  <sect1>
+  <sect1 id="man-help" status="review">
     <title>"Man" and getting help</title>
     <para>
       <emphasis role='strong'>
@@ -428,7 +428,7 @@
       introduction to info pages.
     </para>
 
-    <sect2 id="searching-ma">
+    <sect2 id="searching-ma" status="review">
       <title>Searching for man files</title>
       <para>
        If you aren't sure which command or application you
@@ -467,10 +467,10 @@
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
   
-  <sect1 id="other-things">
+  <sect1 id="other-things" status="review">
     <title>Other Useful Things</title>
 
-    <sect2 id="pasting">
+    <sect2 id="pasting" status="review">
       <title>Pasting in commands</title>
       <para>
        Often, you will be referred to instructions that
@@ -494,7 +494,7 @@
       </para>
     </sect2>
 
-    <sect2 id="save-typing">
+    <sect2 id="save-typing" status="review">
       <title>Save on typing</title>
       <informaltable>
         <tgroup cols='3'>
@@ -567,7 +567,7 @@
       </informaltable>
     </sect2>
 
-    <sect2 id="change-text">
+    <sect2 id="change-text" status="review">
       <title>Change the text</title>
       <para>
        The mouse won't work. Use the <keycap>Left/Right arrow</keycap> keys to

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