------------------------------------------------------------ revno: 3669 committer: Jim Campbell <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> branch nick: xubuntu-hardy timestamp: Mon 2008-03-17 22:40:17 -0500 message: changed the order of index.xml, and made a number of typo corrections throughout the rest of the documentation. modified: xubuntu/about-xubuntu/C/about-xubuntu.xml xubuntu/index.xml xubuntu/musicvideophotos/C/musicvideophotos.xml xubuntu/newtoubuntu/C/newtoubuntu.xml xubuntu/printing/C/printing.xml
=== modified file 'xubuntu/about-xubuntu/C/about-xubuntu.xml' --- a/xubuntu/about-xubuntu/C/about-xubuntu.xml 2007-12-04 04:03:53 +0000 +++ b/xubuntu/about-xubuntu/C/about-xubuntu.xml 2008-03-18 03:40:17 +0000 @@ -13,39 +13,36 @@ <chapter id="about-xubuntu"> <title>Xubuntu - Linux for Human Beings!</title> - <section> + <para>Thank you for your interest in Xubuntu &distro-rev; - the <emphasis>&distro-version;</emphasis> + - released in &distro-release-date;. This section is an introduction to Xubuntu. It explains the + Xubuntu philosophy and roots, as well as introduces the Xubuntu desktop. + </para> + <sect1 id="introduction" status="complete"> <title>Introduction</title> - <para>This section is an introduction to Xubuntu. It explains the Xubuntu philosophy and roots, as - well as introduces the Xubuntu desktop. - </para> - - <para>Thank you for your interest in Xubuntu &distro-rev; - - the <emphasis>&distro-version;</emphasis> - released in &distro-release-date;. - </para> <para>Xubuntu is an entirely open source operating system built around the <emphasis>Linux</emphasis> kernel. The Xubuntu community - being a part of the larger Ubuntu community - is built around the ideals enshrined in the <ulink url= "&ubuntu-philosophy;">Ubuntu Philosophy</ulink>: that software should be available free of charge, that software tools should be usable by people in their local language and despite any disabilities, and that people should have the freedom to customize and alter - their software in whatever way they see fit. For those reasons, the following principles that Ubuntu is built upon also apply to Xubuntu: + their software in whatever way they see fit. For those reasons, Xubuntu is build on the following principles: </para> <itemizedlist> <listitem> - <para>Ubuntu will always be free of charge, and there is - no extra fee for the "enterprise + <para>Xubuntu will always be free of charge, and there is + no extra fee for an "enterprise edition," we make our very best work available to everyone on the same Free terms. </para> </listitem> <listitem> - <para>Ubuntu includes the very best in translations and + <para>Xubuntu includes the very best in translations and accessibility infrastructure that the free software community has to offer, making Xubuntu usable for as many people as possible. </para> </listitem> <listitem> - <para>Ubuntu is released regularly and predictably; a + <para>Xubuntu is released regularly and predictably; a new release is made every six months. You can use the current stable release or the current development release. Each release is supported for @@ -53,7 +50,7 @@ </para> </listitem> <listitem> - <para>Ubuntu is entirely committed to the principles of + <para>Xubuntu is entirely committed to the principles of open source software development; we encourage people to use open source software, improve it and pass it on. @@ -70,12 +67,12 @@ </listitem> <listitem> <para> - <emphasis>Speed</emphasis>. With &xubuntu; you will instantly feel the speed of the &xfce; Desktop Environment, which has been built with low system requirements in mind. Don't worry if your hardware is not the latest and greatest - your computer will most likely feel quite fast with &xubuntu;. + <emphasis>Speed</emphasis>. With &xubuntu; you will instantly feel the speed of the <ulink url="http://www.xfce.org">Xfce</ulink> Desktop Environment, which has been built with low system requirements in mind. Don't worry if your hardware is not the latest and greatest - your computer will most likely feel quite fast with &xubuntu;. </para> </listitem> <listitem> <para> - <emphasis>Elegance</emphasis>. &xubuntu; comes with a modern, clean Look&Feel. Of course, the Desktop is completely customizable - you may choose from among many sets of icons, window borders, color sets, and so on. + <emphasis>Elegance</emphasis>. &xubuntu; comes with a modern, clean Look & Feel. Of course, the Desktop is completely customizable - you may choose from among many sets of icons, window borders, color sets, and so on. </para> </listitem> </itemizedlist> @@ -84,12 +81,12 @@ </para> <para>Find out more at <ulink url="&xubuntu-web;">the Xubuntu website</ulink>. </para> - - <section id="about-xubuntu-name" status="draft"> - <title>About the Name</title> - <para>The "X" in Xubuntu stands for the Xfce graphical desktop environment, but the word "Ubuntu" represents both the technical and philosophical core of the operating system. "Ubuntu" is a South African ethical ideology focusing on people's allegiances and relations with each other. The word comes from the Zulu and Xhosa languages. Ubuntu (pronounced "oo-BOON-too") is seen as a traditional African concept, is regarded as one of the founding principles of the new republic of South Africa and is connected to the idea of an African Renaissance. + </sect1> + <sect1 id="about-xubuntu-name" status="draft"> + <title>About the Xubuntu Name</title> + <para>The "X" in Xubuntu stands for the Xfce graphical desktop environment, but the word "ubuntu" represents both the technical and philosophical core of the operating system. "Ubuntu" is a South African ethical ideology focusing on people's allegiances and relations with each other. The word comes from the Zulu and Xhosa languages. Ubuntu (pronounced "oo-BOON-too") is seen as a traditional African concept, is regarded as one of the founding principles of the new republic of South Africa and is connected to the idea of an African Renaissance. </para> - <para>A rough translation of the principle of Ubuntu is "humanity towards others". Another translation could be: "the belief in a universal bond of sharing that connects all humanity". + <para>A rough translation of the principle of ubuntu is "humanity towards others". Another translation could be: "the belief in a universal bond of sharing that connects all humanity." </para> <blockquote><attribution>Archbishop Desmond Tutu</attribution> <para>"A person with ubuntu is open and available to others, affirming of others, does not feel threatened that others are able and good, for he or she has a proper self-assurance that comes from knowing that he or she belongs in a greater whole and is diminished when others are humiliated or diminished, when others are tortured or oppressed." @@ -97,10 +94,10 @@ </blockquote> <para>As a part of the Ubuntu family of Linux-based distributions, the Xubuntu operating system brings the spirit of ubuntu to the software world. </para> - </section> - <section id="free-software" status="draft"> - <title>Free Software</title> - <para>The Xubuntu project is entirely committed to the + </sect1> + <sect1 id="free-software" status="draft"> + <title>Free Software</title> + <para>The Xubuntu project is entirely committed to the principles of free software development; people are encouraged to use free software, improve it, and pass it on. @@ -109,9 +106,9 @@ </para> <para>You can find out more about free software and the ideological and technical philosophy behind it at the <ulink url="&gnu-philosophy;">GNU website</ulink>. </para> - </section> - <section id="xubuntu-difference" status="draft"> - <title>The Difference</title> + </sect1> + <sect1 id="xubuntu-difference" status="draft"> + <title>The Xubuntu Difference</title> <para>There are many different operating systems based on Linux: Debian, SuSE, Gentoo, Red Hat, and Mandriva are examples. Xubuntu is yet another contender in what @@ -121,7 +118,7 @@ <para>Xubuntu is part of the Ubuntu family of Linux distributions, and is based on Debian, one of the most widely acclaimed, technologically advanced, and well-supported - distributions, Xubuntu + distributions. Xubuntu aims to create a distribution that provides an up-to-date and coherent Linux system for desktop and server computing. Xubuntu includes a number of carefully @@ -145,11 +142,11 @@ Intel processors). A community-supported PowerPC (iBook/Powerbook, G4 and G5) architecture architecture is also available. </para> - </section> - <section id="xubuntu-desktop" status="draft"> - <title>The Desktop</title> + </sect1> + <sect1 id="xubuntu-desktop" status="draft"> + <title>The Xubuntu Desktop</title> <para>As mentioned above, the default desktop environment for Xubuntu is <ulink - url="&xfce;">Xfce</ulink>, one of the top three Unix and Linux desktop suite and + url="&xfce;">Xfce</ulink>, one of the top three Unix and Linux desktop and development platforms. In the words of Olivier Fourdan, the creator of the Xfce desktop environment, "Xfce is a lightweight desktop environment for various *NIX systems. Designed for productivity, it loads and executes applications fast, while @@ -180,8 +177,8 @@ Once kubuntu-desktop is installed, you can also choose to use the KDE desktop environment when logging in to your computer. </para> - </section> - <section id="version-numbers" status="complete"> + </sect1> + <sect1 id="version-numbers" status="complete"> <title>Version and Release Numbers</title> <para>The Xubuntu version numbering scheme is based on the date we release a version of the distribution. The @@ -191,8 +188,8 @@ June of 2006 so its version was 6.06. This version of Xubuntu (&distro-version;) was released in &distro-release-date; so its version number is &distro-rev;. </para> - </section> - <section id="xubuntu-backing-support" status="draft"> + </sect1> + <sect1 id="xubuntu-backing-support" status="draft"> <title>Backing and Support</title> <para>Xubuntu is developed and supported by a quickly growing community. The project is sponsored by <ulink @@ -207,8 +204,8 @@ community. Information regarding community support can be found at the <ulink url="&xubuntu-web-help;">Help & Support</ulink> page of the Xubuntu website. </para> - </section> - <section id="about-linux" status="complete"> + </sect1> + <sect1 id="about-linux" status="complete"> <title>What is Linux?</title> <para>The <ulink url="&kernel;">Linux kernel</ulink>, pronounced 'linnuks' is the heart of the Xubuntu operating system. @@ -231,7 +228,7 @@ source technology as good as it can be. </para> <para>People in this community gave rise to initiatives such as - Ubuntu, standards committees that shape the development of the + Xubuntu, standards committees that shape the development of the Internet, organizations like the Mozilla Foundation, responsible for creating Mozilla Firefox, and countless other software projects from which you've certainly benefited in the past. @@ -240,8 +237,8 @@ influencing software developers and users everywhere to drive communities with common goals. </para> - </section> - <section id="about-gnu" status="complete"> + </sect1> + <sect1 id="about-gnu" status="complete"> <title>What is GNU?</title> <para>The <emphasis>GNU Project</emphasis>, pronounced “guh-noo”, was launched in 1984 to develop a complete UNIX style operating system which @@ -250,9 +247,9 @@ </para> <para>The GNU project is closely linked to the philosophy of free software, which is central to the projects that derive from it, - such as Ubuntu. The concept of free software is explained at <xref + such as Xubuntu. The concept of free software is explained at <xref linkend="free-software"/>. </para> - </section> - </section> + </sect1> + </chapter> === modified file 'xubuntu/index.xml' --- a/xubuntu/index.xml 2008-03-17 04:54:13 +0000 +++ b/xubuntu/index.xml 2008-03-18 03:40:17 +0000 @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ Some of the most common issues for new users are: <itemizedlist> <listitem> - <para>How to connect to the internet. See <xref linkend="internet"/>.</para> + <para>How to connect to the internet. See <xref linkend="connect-to-internet"/>.</para> </listitem> <listitem> <para>How to play music. See <xref linkend="music"/>.</para> @@ -76,24 +76,26 @@ <para>The complete set of Xubuntu documentation topics are listed below. If you require help with a topic or problem that is not addressed by the documentation, consult the Xubuntu community's <ulink url="http://xubuntu.org/help">help page</ulink>. There you will find links to additional help resources.</para> - <para>Would you like to contribute to Xubuntu? The following page describes <ulink url="http://xubuntu.org/devel">how to get involved with Xubuntu development</ulink>. If you would like to contribute to Xubuntu documentation, see the <ulink url="http://xubuntu.org/devel#documentation">the documentation</ulink> portion of the development page page, and also see the Ubuntu Documentation Team's <ulink url="https://wiki.ubuntu.com/DocumentationTeam">wiki page</ulink>.</para> + <para>Would you like to contribute to Xubuntu? The following page describes <ulink url="http://xubuntu.org/devel">how to get involved with Xubuntu development</ulink>.</para> + + <para>If you would like to contribute to Xubuntu documentation, see the <ulink url="http://xubuntu.org/devel#documentation">the documentation</ulink> portion of the development page page, and also see the Ubuntu Documentation Team's <ulink url="https://wiki.ubuntu.com/DocumentationTeam">wiki page</ulink>.</para> </abstract> </bookinfo> + <xi:include href="newtoubuntu/&language;/newtoubuntu.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> <xi:include href="about-xubuntu/&language;/about-xubuntu.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> - <xi:include href="newtoubuntu/&language;/newtoubuntu.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> - <xi:include href="config-desktop/&language;/config-desktop.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> - <xi:include href="administrative/&language;/administrative.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> <xi:include href="windows/&language;/windows.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> - <xi:include href="basic-commands/&language;/basic-commands.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> - <xi:include href="add-applications/&language;/add-applications.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> <xi:include href="files-and-docs/&language;/files-and-docs.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> + <xi:include href="musicvideophotos/&language;/musicvideophotos.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> <xi:include href="internet/&language;/internet.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> - <xi:include href="musicvideophotos/&language;/musicvideophotos.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> <xi:include href="office/&language;/office.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> <xi:include href="printing/&language;/printing.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> - <xi:include href="games/&language;/games.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> + <xi:include href="games/&language;/games.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> + <xi:include href="add-applications/&language;/add-applications.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> + <xi:include href="config-desktop/&language;/config-desktop.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> <xi:include href="keeping-safe/&language;/keeping-safe.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> + <xi:include href="administrative/&language;/administrative.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> + <xi:include href="basic-commands/&language;/basic-commands.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> <xi:include href="newtoubuntu/&language;/usersandgroups.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> <xi:include href="programming/&language;/programming.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> <xi:include href="advanced-topics/&language;/advanced-topics.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> === modified file 'xubuntu/musicvideophotos/C/musicvideophotos.xml' --- a/xubuntu/musicvideophotos/C/musicvideophotos.xml 2008-03-17 00:05:25 +0000 +++ b/xubuntu/musicvideophotos/C/musicvideophotos.xml 2008-03-18 03:40:17 +0000 @@ -323,9 +323,9 @@ <para>This additional repository is not an official part of Ubuntu. However, it is quite convenient for installing restricted pieces of software. To enable it, follow these instructions:</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem><para>Launch &synaptic; and choose <menuchoice><guimenu>Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Repositories</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.</para></listitem> - <listitem><para>In the tab <emphasis>Third-Party Software</emphasis>, add the line <screen>deb http://packages.medibuntu.org/ gutsy free non-free</screen></para></listitem> + <listitem><para>In the tab <emphasis>Third-Party Software</emphasis>, add the line <screen>deb http://packages.medibuntu.org/ hardy free non-free</screen></para></listitem> <listitem><para>In the console, type <screen>wget -q http://packages.medibuntu.org/medibuntu-key.gpg -O- | sudo apt-key add -</screen>. This will make sure that the additional packages you install will really come from the correct source.</para></listitem> - <listitem><para>Hit <emphasis>Reload</emphasis> in Synaptic.</para></listitem> + <listitem><para>Click <emphasis>Reload</emphasis> in Synaptic.</para></listitem> </itemizedlist> </sect1> === modified file 'xubuntu/newtoubuntu/C/newtoubuntu.xml' --- a/xubuntu/newtoubuntu/C/newtoubuntu.xml 2008-03-17 23:10:25 +0000 +++ b/xubuntu/newtoubuntu/C/newtoubuntu.xml 2008-03-18 03:40:17 +0000 @@ -23,23 +23,22 @@ <listitem> <para> - Learn something about the idea behind Xubuntu (see <xref linkend="about-xubuntu"/>). + Learn something about the ideas behind Xubuntu (see <xref linkend="about-xubuntu"/>). </para> </listitem> <listitem> <para> - If you are in need of learning basic computer skills, we recommend you to read the chapter <ulink url="http://www.gnome.org/learn/users-guide/2.14/basic-skills.html">Basic Skills</ulink> in the GNOME documentation. Even though this was written for a different Linux desktop than the one shipped with Xubuntu, the instructions it gives you on how to use your mouse and keyboard when interacting with your computer apply to this operating system as well. - </para> - </listitem> - <listitem> - <para> - Get an overview of the Xfce desktop shipped with Xubuntu (see <xref linkend="xfce-desktop"/>). - </para> - </listitem> - <listitem> - <para> - Learn more about the role of the administrator (see <xref linkend="root-and-sudo"/>). - + If you are in need of learning basic computer skills, we recommend you to read the chapter <ulink url="http://www.gnome.org/learn/users-guide/2.14/basic-skills.html">Basic Skills</ulink> in the GNOME documentation. Even though this was written for a different Linux desktop than the one shipped with Xubuntu, the mouse and keyboard instructions also apply to the Xubuntu operating system. + </para> + </listitem> + <listitem> + <para> + Get an overview of the Xfce desktop shipped with Xubuntu in <xref linkend="xfce-desktop"/>. + </para> + </listitem> + <listitem> + <para> + Learn more about the role of the administrator in <xref linkend="root-and-sudo"/>. </para> </listitem> <listitem> === modified file 'xubuntu/printing/C/printing.xml' --- a/xubuntu/printing/C/printing.xml 2008-03-17 00:05:25 +0000 +++ b/xubuntu/printing/C/printing.xml 2008-03-18 03:40:17 +0000 @@ -85,11 +85,11 @@ <title>Scanning</title> <para>Most scanners are automatically supported by Xubuntu, and should be easy to install and operate. This guide will walk you through how to use your scanner and what to do if Xubuntu cannot find your scanner.</para> <section> - <title>Does my scanner work with Ubuntu?</title> + <title>Does my scanner work with Xubuntu?</title> <para>There are three ways to see if you scanner works in Xubuntu:</para> <procedure> <step><para>Simply plug it in and try it! If it is a newer Universal Serial Bus (USB) scanner, it is likely that it will just work.</para></step> - <step><para>Check <ulink url="https://wiki.ubuntu.com/HardwareSupportComponentsScanners"> https://wiki.ubuntu.com/HardwareSupportComponentsScanners</ulink> which is Ubuntu specific.</para></step> + <step><para>Check the <ulink url="https://wiki.ubuntu.com/HardwareSupportComponentsScanners"> Ubuntu Scanner Hardware Support</ulink> wiki page, which is Ubuntu specific.</para></step> <step><para><ulink url="http://www.sane-project.org/sane-backends.html">SANE project listing of support scanners</ulink> - The SANE (Scanner Access Now Easy) project provides most of the backends to the scanning software on Ubuntu.</para></step> </procedure> </section> -- Xubuntu desktop documentation https://code.launchpad.net/~ubuntu-core-doc/ubuntu-doc/xubuntu-hardy You are receiving this branch notification because you are subscribed to it. -- ubuntu-doc-commits mailing list ubuntu-doc-commits@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-doc-commits