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revno: 3669
committer: Jim Campbell <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
branch nick: xubuntu-hardy
timestamp: Mon 2008-03-17 22:40:17 -0500
message:
  changed the order of index.xml, and made a number of typo corrections 
throughout the rest of the documentation.
modified:
  xubuntu/about-xubuntu/C/about-xubuntu.xml
  xubuntu/index.xml
  xubuntu/musicvideophotos/C/musicvideophotos.xml
  xubuntu/newtoubuntu/C/newtoubuntu.xml
  xubuntu/printing/C/printing.xml

=== modified file 'xubuntu/about-xubuntu/C/about-xubuntu.xml'
--- a/xubuntu/about-xubuntu/C/about-xubuntu.xml 2007-12-04 04:03:53 +0000
+++ b/xubuntu/about-xubuntu/C/about-xubuntu.xml 2008-03-18 03:40:17 +0000
@@ -13,39 +13,36 @@
 
 <chapter id="about-xubuntu">
        <title>Xubuntu - Linux for Human Beings!</title>
-               <section>
+            <para>Thank you for your interest in Xubuntu &distro-rev; - the 
<emphasis>&distro-version;</emphasis> 
+            - released in &distro-release-date;.  This section is an 
introduction to Xubuntu. It explains the
+            Xubuntu philosophy and roots, as well as introduces the Xubuntu 
desktop.
+            </para>
+    <sect1 id="introduction" status="complete">
                <title>Introduction</title>
-                       <para>This section is an introduction to Xubuntu. It 
explains the Xubuntu philosophy and roots, as
-                       well as introduces the Xubuntu desktop.
-                               </para>
-
-            <para>Thank you for your interest in Xubuntu &distro-rev;
-                - the <emphasis>&distro-version;</emphasis> - released in 
&distro-release-date;.
-                               </para> 
                        <para>Xubuntu is an entirely open source operating 
system built around the <emphasis>Linux</emphasis>
                        kernel. The Xubuntu community - being a part of the 
larger Ubuntu community - is built around the ideals enshrined in the <ulink 
url=
                        "&ubuntu-philosophy;">Ubuntu Philosophy</ulink>: that 
software should be available free 
                        of charge, that software tools should be usable by 
people in their local language and 
                        despite any disabilities, and that people should have 
the freedom to customize and alter 
-                       their software in whatever way they see fit. For those 
reasons, the following principles that Ubuntu is built upon also apply to 
Xubuntu: 
+                       their software in whatever way they see fit. For those 
reasons, Xubuntu is build on the following principles: 
                        </para>
                 <itemizedlist>
                     <listitem>
-                        <para>Ubuntu will always be free of charge, and there 
is
-                            no extra fee for the &quot;enterprise
+                        <para>Xubuntu will always be free of charge, and there 
is
+                            no extra fee for an &quot;enterprise
                             edition,&quot; we make our very best work
                             available to everyone on the same Free terms.
                                                                </para>
                     </listitem>
                     <listitem>
-                        <para>Ubuntu includes the very best in translations and
+                        <para>Xubuntu includes the very best in translations 
and
                             accessibility infrastructure that the free software
                             community has to offer, making Xubuntu usable for 
as
                             many people as possible.
                                                                </para>
                     </listitem>
                     <listitem>
-                        <para>Ubuntu is released regularly and predictably; a
+                        <para>Xubuntu is released regularly and predictably; a
                             new release is made every six months. You can use
                             the current stable release or the current
                             development release. Each release is supported for
@@ -53,7 +50,7 @@
                                                                </para>
                     </listitem>
                     <listitem>
-                        <para>Ubuntu is entirely committed to the principles of
+                        <para>Xubuntu is entirely committed to the principles 
of
                             open source software development; we encourage
                             people to use open source software, improve it and
                             pass it on.
@@ -70,12 +67,12 @@
                                </listitem>
                                <listitem>
                                        <para>
-                                               <emphasis>Speed</emphasis>. 
With &xubuntu; you will instantly feel the speed of the &xfce; Desktop 
Environment, which has been built with low system requirements in mind. Don't 
worry if your hardware is not the latest and greatest - your computer will most 
likely feel quite fast with &xubuntu;. 
+                                               <emphasis>Speed</emphasis>. 
With &xubuntu; you will instantly feel the speed of the <ulink 
url="http://www.xfce.org";>Xfce</ulink> Desktop Environment, which has been 
built with low system requirements in mind. Don't worry if your hardware is not 
the latest and greatest - your computer will most likely feel quite fast with 
&xubuntu;. 
                                        </para>
                                </listitem>
                                <listitem>
                                        <para>
-                                               <emphasis>Elegance</emphasis>. 
&xubuntu; comes with a modern, clean Look&amp;Feel. Of course, the Desktop is 
completely customizable - you may choose from among many sets of icons, window 
borders, color sets, and so on.
+                                               <emphasis>Elegance</emphasis>. 
&xubuntu; comes with a modern, clean Look &amp; Feel. Of course, the Desktop is 
completely customizable - you may choose from among many sets of icons, window 
borders, color sets, and so on.
                                        </para>
                                </listitem>
                        </itemizedlist>
@@ -84,12 +81,12 @@
                </para>
                                        <para>Find out more at <ulink 
url="&xubuntu-web;">the Xubuntu website</ulink>.
                        </para>
-
-            <section id="about-xubuntu-name" status="draft">
-                    <title>About the Name</title>
-                                                       <para>The "X" in 
Xubuntu stands for the Xfce graphical desktop environment, but the word 
"Ubuntu" represents both the technical and philosophical core of the operating 
system.  "Ubuntu" is a South African ethical ideology focusing on people&apos;s 
allegiances and relations with each other. The word comes from the Zulu and 
Xhosa languages. Ubuntu (pronounced &quot;oo-BOON-too&quot;) is seen as a 
traditional African concept, is regarded as one of the founding principles of 
the new republic of South Africa and is connected to the idea of an African 
Renaissance.
+        </sect1>
+        <sect1 id="about-xubuntu-name" status="draft">
+            <title>About the Xubuntu Name</title>
+            <para>The "X" in Xubuntu stands for the Xfce graphical desktop 
environment, but the word "ubuntu" represents both the technical and 
philosophical core of the operating system.  "Ubuntu" is a South African 
ethical ideology focusing on people&apos;s allegiances and relations with each 
other. The word comes from the Zulu and Xhosa languages. Ubuntu (pronounced 
&quot;oo-BOON-too&quot;) is seen as a traditional African concept, is regarded 
as one of the founding principles of the new republic of South Africa and is 
connected to the idea of an African Renaissance.
                                                                </para>
-                                                       <para>A rough 
translation of the principle of Ubuntu is &quot;humanity towards others&quot;. 
Another translation could be: &quot;the belief in a universal bond of sharing 
that connects all humanity&quot;.
+                                                       <para>A rough 
translation of the principle of ubuntu is &quot;humanity towards others&quot;. 
Another translation could be: &quot;the belief in a universal bond of sharing 
that connects all humanity.&quot;
                                                                </para>
                        <blockquote><attribution>Archbishop Desmond 
Tutu</attribution>
                                <para>&quot;A person with ubuntu is open and 
available to others, affirming of others, does not feel threatened that others 
are able and good, for he or she has a proper self-assurance that comes from 
knowing that he or she belongs in a greater whole and is diminished when others 
are humiliated or diminished, when others are tortured or oppressed.&quot;
@@ -97,10 +94,10 @@
                        </blockquote>
                 <para>As a part of the Ubuntu family of Linux-based 
distributions, the Xubuntu operating system brings the spirit of ubuntu to the 
software world.
                                        </para>
-               </section>
-                <section id="free-software" status="draft">
-                    <title>Free Software</title>
-                               <para>The Xubuntu project is entirely committed 
to the
+               </sect1>
+        <sect1 id="free-software" status="draft">
+            <title>Free Software</title>
+                <para>The Xubuntu project is entirely committed to the
                         principles of free software development; people
                         are encouraged to use free software, improve it,
                         and pass it on.
@@ -109,9 +106,9 @@
                     </para>
                        <para>You can find out more about free software and the 
ideological and technical philosophy behind it at the <ulink 
url="&gnu-philosophy;">GNU website</ulink>.
                        </para>
-                </section>
-                <section id="xubuntu-difference" status="draft">
-                    <title>The Difference</title>
+                </sect1>
+                <sect1 id="xubuntu-difference" status="draft">
+                    <title>The Xubuntu Difference</title>
                        <para>There are many different operating systems based 
on Linux:
                                Debian, SuSE, Gentoo, Red Hat, and Mandriva are 
examples. 
                                                Xubuntu is yet another 
contender in what
@@ -121,7 +118,7 @@
                        <para>Xubuntu is part of the Ubuntu family of Linux 
distributions, and is based on
                        Debian, one of the most widely acclaimed,
                         technologically advanced, and well-supported
-                        distributions, Xubuntu
+                        distributions.  Xubuntu
                         aims to create a distribution that provides
                         an up-to-date and coherent Linux system for desktop and
                         server computing. Xubuntu includes a number of 
carefully
@@ -145,11 +142,11 @@
                         Intel processors).  A community-supported PowerPC 
(iBook/Powerbook, G4 and
                         G5) architecture architecture is also available.
                                                        </para>
-                </section>
-                <section id="xubuntu-desktop" status="draft">
-                    <title>The Desktop</title>
+                </sect1>
+                <sect1 id="xubuntu-desktop" status="draft">
+                    <title>The Xubuntu Desktop</title>
                        <para>As mentioned above, the default desktop 
environment for Xubuntu is <ulink
-                            url="&xfce;">Xfce</ulink>, one of the top three 
Unix and Linux desktop suite and
+                            url="&xfce;">Xfce</ulink>, one of the top three 
Unix and Linux desktop and
                             development platforms.  In the words of Olivier 
Fourdan, the creator of the Xfce
                             desktop environment, "Xfce is a lightweight 
desktop environment for various *NIX
                             systems. Designed for productivity, it loads and 
executes applications fast, while
@@ -180,8 +177,8 @@
                         Once kubuntu-desktop is installed, you can also choose 
to use 
                         the KDE desktop environment when logging in to your 
computer.
                                                        </para>
-                               </section>                      
-                <section id="version-numbers" status="complete">
+                               </sect1>                        
+                <sect1 id="version-numbers" status="complete">
                     <title>Version and Release Numbers</title>
                        <para>The Xubuntu version numbering scheme is based on 
the
                         date we release a version of the distribution. The
@@ -191,8 +188,8 @@
                         June of 2006 so its version was 6.06. This version of 
Xubuntu (&distro-version;) was
                         released in &distro-release-date; so its version 
number is &distro-rev;.
                                                        </para>
-                </section>
-                <section id="xubuntu-backing-support" status="draft">
+                </sect1>
+                <sect1 id="xubuntu-backing-support" status="draft">
                     <title>Backing and Support</title>
                        <para>Xubuntu is developed and supported by a quickly 
growing community.
                         The project is sponsored by <ulink
@@ -207,8 +204,8 @@
                         community.  Information regarding community support 
can be found at the 
                         <ulink url="&xubuntu-web-help;">Help &amp; 
Support</ulink> page of the Xubuntu website.
                                                        </para>
-                </section>
-               <section id="about-linux" status="complete">
+                </sect1>
+               <sect1 id="about-linux" status="complete">
                        <title>What is Linux?</title>
                                <para>The <ulink url="&kernel;">Linux 
kernel</ulink>, pronounced
                                &apos;linnuks&apos; is the heart of the Xubuntu 
operating system.  
@@ -231,7 +228,7 @@
                                source technology as good as it can be.
                                                        </para>
                                <para>People in this community gave rise to 
initiatives such as
-                               Ubuntu, standards committees that shape the 
development of the
+                               Xubuntu, standards committees that shape the 
development of the
                                Internet, organizations like the Mozilla 
Foundation, responsible
                                for creating Mozilla Firefox, and countless 
other software
                                projects from which you&apos;ve certainly 
benefited in the past.
@@ -240,8 +237,8 @@
                                                influencing software developers 
and users everywhere to drive
                                                communities with common goals.
                                                        </para>
-                       </section>
-                       <section id="about-gnu" status="complete">
+                       </sect1>
+                       <sect1 id="about-gnu" status="complete">
                        <title>What is GNU?</title>
                                <para>The <emphasis>GNU Project</emphasis>, 
pronounced “guh-noo”, was
                                launched in 1984 to develop a complete UNIX 
style operating system which 
@@ -250,9 +247,9 @@
                                                        </para>
                                                <para>The GNU project is 
closely linked to the philosophy of free
                                                software, which is central to 
the projects that derive from it, 
-                                               such as Ubuntu. The concept of 
free software is explained at <xref 
+                                               such as Xubuntu. The concept of 
free software is explained at <xref 
                                                linkend="free-software"/>.
                                                        </para>
-                               </section>
-       </section>
+                               </sect1>
+
 </chapter>

=== modified file 'xubuntu/index.xml'
--- a/xubuntu/index.xml 2008-03-17 04:54:13 +0000
+++ b/xubuntu/index.xml 2008-03-18 03:40:17 +0000
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
                                                Some of the most common issues 
for new users are:
                                                <itemizedlist>
                                                         <listitem>
-                                                                        
<para>How to connect to the internet. See <xref linkend="internet"/>.</para>
+                                                                        
<para>How to connect to the internet. See <xref 
linkend="connect-to-internet"/>.</para>
                                                         </listitem>     
                                                        <listitem>
                                                                         
<para>How to play music. See <xref linkend="music"/>.</para>
@@ -76,24 +76,26 @@
    
                                        <para>The complete set of Xubuntu 
documentation topics are listed below.  If you require help with a topic or 
problem that is not addressed by the documentation, consult the Xubuntu 
community's <ulink url="http://xubuntu.org/help";>help page</ulink>.  There you 
will find links to additional help resources.</para>
                                        
-                               <para>Would you like to contribute to Xubuntu? 
The following page describes  <ulink url="http://xubuntu.org/devel";>how to get 
involved with Xubuntu development</ulink>.  If you would like to contribute to 
Xubuntu documentation, see the <ulink 
url="http://xubuntu.org/devel#documentation";>the documentation</ulink> portion 
of the development page page, and also see the Ubuntu Documentation Team's 
<ulink url="https://wiki.ubuntu.com/DocumentationTeam";>wiki page</ulink>.</para>
+                               <para>Would you like to contribute to Xubuntu? 
The following page describes  <ulink url="http://xubuntu.org/devel";>how to get 
involved with Xubuntu development</ulink>.</para>
+                               
+                               <para>If you would like to contribute to 
Xubuntu documentation, see the <ulink 
url="http://xubuntu.org/devel#documentation";>the documentation</ulink> portion 
of the development page page, and also see the Ubuntu Documentation Team's 
<ulink url="https://wiki.ubuntu.com/DocumentationTeam";>wiki page</ulink>.</para>
 
                </abstract>
        </bookinfo>
+        <xi:include href="newtoubuntu/&language;/newtoubuntu.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
         <xi:include href="about-xubuntu/&language;/about-xubuntu.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
-        <xi:include href="newtoubuntu/&language;/newtoubuntu.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
-        <xi:include href="config-desktop/&language;/config-desktop.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
-        <xi:include href="administrative/&language;/administrative.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
         <xi:include href="windows/&language;/windows.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>        
-        <xi:include href="basic-commands/&language;/basic-commands.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
-        <xi:include href="add-applications/&language;/add-applications.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
         <xi:include href="files-and-docs/&language;/files-and-docs.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+        <xi:include href="musicvideophotos/&language;/musicvideophotos.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
         <xi:include href="internet/&language;/internet.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
-        <xi:include href="musicvideophotos/&language;/musicvideophotos.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
         <xi:include href="office/&language;/office.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
         <xi:include href="printing/&language;/printing.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
-        <xi:include href="games/&language;/games.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>                
+        <xi:include href="games/&language;/games.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>             
+        <xi:include href="add-applications/&language;/add-applications.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>   
+        <xi:include href="config-desktop/&language;/config-desktop.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
         <xi:include href="keeping-safe/&language;/keeping-safe.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+        <xi:include href="administrative/&language;/administrative.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+        <xi:include href="basic-commands/&language;/basic-commands.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
         <xi:include href="newtoubuntu/&language;/usersandgroups.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
         <xi:include href="programming/&language;/programming.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
         <xi:include href="advanced-topics/&language;/advanced-topics.xml" 
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>

=== modified file 'xubuntu/musicvideophotos/C/musicvideophotos.xml'
--- a/xubuntu/musicvideophotos/C/musicvideophotos.xml   2008-03-17 00:05:25 
+0000
+++ b/xubuntu/musicvideophotos/C/musicvideophotos.xml   2008-03-18 03:40:17 
+0000
@@ -323,9 +323,9 @@
                <para>This additional repository is not an official part of 
Ubuntu. However, it is quite convenient for installing restricted pieces of 
software. To enable it, follow these instructions:</para>
                <itemizedlist>
                        <listitem><para>Launch &synaptic; and choose 
<menuchoice><guimenu>Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Repositories</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.</para></listitem>
-                       <listitem><para>In the tab <emphasis>Third-Party 
Software</emphasis>, add the line <screen>deb http://packages.medibuntu.org/ 
gutsy free non-free</screen></para></listitem>
+                       <listitem><para>In the tab <emphasis>Third-Party 
Software</emphasis>, add the line <screen>deb http://packages.medibuntu.org/ 
hardy free non-free</screen></para></listitem>
                        <listitem><para>In the console, type <screen>wget -q 
http://packages.medibuntu.org/medibuntu-key.gpg -O- | sudo apt-key add 
-</screen>. This will make sure that the additional packages you install will 
really come from the correct source.</para></listitem>
-                       <listitem><para>Hit <emphasis>Reload</emphasis> in 
Synaptic.</para></listitem>
+                       <listitem><para>Click <emphasis>Reload</emphasis> in 
Synaptic.</para></listitem>
                </itemizedlist>
        </sect1>
 

=== modified file 'xubuntu/newtoubuntu/C/newtoubuntu.xml'
--- a/xubuntu/newtoubuntu/C/newtoubuntu.xml     2008-03-17 23:10:25 +0000
+++ b/xubuntu/newtoubuntu/C/newtoubuntu.xml     2008-03-18 03:40:17 +0000
@@ -23,23 +23,22 @@
 
                        <listitem>
                        <para>
-                               Learn something about the idea behind Xubuntu 
(see <xref linkend="about-xubuntu"/>).
+                               Learn something about the ideas behind Xubuntu 
(see <xref linkend="about-xubuntu"/>).
                        </para>
                        </listitem>
                <listitem>
                                        <para>
-                               If you are in need of learning basic computer 
skills, we recommend you to read the chapter <ulink 
url="http://www.gnome.org/learn/users-guide/2.14/basic-skills.html";>Basic 
Skills</ulink> in the GNOME documentation. Even though this was written for a 
different Linux desktop than the one shipped with Xubuntu, the instructions it 
gives you on how to use your mouse and keyboard when interacting with your 
computer apply to this operating system as well. 
-                       </para>
-                       </listitem>
-                       <listitem>
-                       <para>
-                               Get an overview of the Xfce desktop shipped 
with Xubuntu (see <xref linkend="xfce-desktop"/>).
-                       </para>
-                       </listitem>
-                       <listitem>
-                       <para>
-                               Learn more about the role of the administrator 
(see <xref linkend="root-and-sudo"/>).
-
+                               If you are in need of learning basic computer 
skills, we recommend you to read the chapter <ulink 
url="http://www.gnome.org/learn/users-guide/2.14/basic-skills.html";>Basic 
Skills</ulink> in the GNOME documentation. Even though this was written for a 
different Linux desktop than the one shipped with Xubuntu, the mouse and 
keyboard instructions also apply to the Xubuntu operating system. 
+                       </para>
+                       </listitem>
+                       <listitem>
+                       <para>
+                               Get an overview of the Xfce desktop shipped 
with Xubuntu in <xref linkend="xfce-desktop"/>.
+                       </para>
+                       </listitem>
+                       <listitem>
+                       <para>
+                               Learn more about the role of the administrator 
in <xref linkend="root-and-sudo"/>.
                        </para>
                </listitem>
                <listitem>

=== modified file 'xubuntu/printing/C/printing.xml'
--- a/xubuntu/printing/C/printing.xml   2008-03-17 00:05:25 +0000
+++ b/xubuntu/printing/C/printing.xml   2008-03-18 03:40:17 +0000
@@ -85,11 +85,11 @@
                        <title>Scanning</title>
                        <para>Most scanners are automatically supported by 
Xubuntu, and should be easy to install and operate. This guide will walk you 
through how to use your scanner and what to do if Xubuntu cannot find your 
scanner.</para>
                        <section>
-                               <title>Does my scanner work with Ubuntu?</title>
+                               <title>Does my scanner work with 
Xubuntu?</title>
                                <para>There are three ways to see if you 
scanner works in Xubuntu:</para>
                                <procedure>
                                        <step><para>Simply plug it in and try 
it! If it is a newer Universal Serial Bus (USB) scanner, it is likely that it 
will just work.</para></step>
-                                       <step><para>Check <ulink 
url="https://wiki.ubuntu.com/HardwareSupportComponentsScanners";> 
https://wiki.ubuntu.com/HardwareSupportComponentsScanners</ulink> which is 
Ubuntu specific.</para></step>
+                                       <step><para>Check the <ulink 
url="https://wiki.ubuntu.com/HardwareSupportComponentsScanners";> Ubuntu Scanner 
Hardware Support</ulink> wiki page, which is Ubuntu specific.</para></step>
                                        <step><para><ulink 
url="http://www.sane-project.org/sane-backends.html";>SANE project listing of 
support scanners</ulink> - The SANE (Scanner Access Now Easy) project provides 
most of the backends to the scanning software on Ubuntu.</para></step>
                                </procedure>
                        </section>



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