While the original text is a bit awkward, it does emphasis that there
are some major differences (as opposed to slight differences). Can we
rephrase the sentence to maintain that emphasis?
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Assignee: (unassigned) => Kevin Godby (godbyk)
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Milestone: None => edition-2
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Importance: Undecided => Low
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Status: New => In Progress
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Rephrase "some things that work very differently" (page 9)
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584460
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: In Progress
Bug description:
In the below sentence, "some things that work very differently" should be
rephrased to "differences". As well as this being the antonym of the word
previously used (similarities) it is a lot less confusing and simpler.
You will no doubt notice many similarities to both Microsoft Windows and Mac
OSX, as well as some things that work very differently.
becomes
You will no doubt notice many similarities to both Microsoft Windows and Mac
OSX, as well as some differences.
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