Public bug reported:
Rev. 788
Prologue: What is Linux? section (p.9, PDF p.11)
Type: grammar
Final sentence needs a comma:
"and uses one of the more popular graphical desktop environments[,] called
GNOME."
Without it the sentence suggests that there are several desktop environments
called GNOME; ignoring versions, there's only one, isn't there?
** Affects: ubuntu-manual
Importance: Undecided
Status: New
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P.9: Comma needed before "called GNOME"
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584964
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: New
Bug description:
Rev. 788
Prologue: What is Linux? section (p.9, PDF p.11)
Type: grammar
Final sentence needs a comma:
"and uses one of the more popular graphical desktop environments[,] called
GNOME."
Without it the sentence suggests that there are several desktop environments
called GNOME; ignoring versions, there's only one, isn't there?
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