** Description changed: Rev. 788 Ch. 3, § "Getting online", p. 41 (PDF p. 43) Type: grammar Manual has: In order to connect to wireless connection, you must have a working wireless network. Ignoring the lack of article (a wireless connection) or plural (wireless connections), this is incorrect as "wireless connection" is being used to describe a wireless network, which makes the sentence a statement of the obvious: In order to connect to a wireless network, you must have a working wireless network. Suggestion, incorporating rewrites of following sentences: - In order to connect wirelessly, you must be in a location with a working wireless network. To create your own, you will need to buy and install a wireless router or access point, although some locations already have a publicly-accessible wireless network established. + In order to connect wirelessly, you must be in a location with a working wireless network. To create your own, you will need to buy and install a wireless router or access point, but some locations already have a publicly accessible wireless network established.
-- "Wireless connection" inappropriately used on p.41 https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585436 You received this bug notification because you are a member of Ubuntu Manual Bugs, which is subscribed to Ubuntu Manual. Status in Ubuntu Manual: New Bug description: Rev. 788 Ch. 3, § "Getting online", p. 41 (PDF p. 43) Type: grammar Manual has: In order to connect to wireless connection, you must have a working wireless network. Ignoring the lack of article (a wireless connection) or plural (wireless connections), this is incorrect as "wireless connection" is being used to describe a wireless network, which makes the sentence a statement of the obvious: In order to connect to a wireless network, you must have a working wireless network. Suggestion, incorporating rewrites of following sentences: In order to connect wirelessly, you must be in a location with a working wireless network. To create your own, you will need to buy and install a wireless router or access point, but some locations already have a publicly accessible wireless network established. _______________________________________________ Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual-bugs Post to : [email protected] Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual-bugs More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp
