This fix will appear in the second edition. Thanks!

** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: In Progress => Fix Committed

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People can be referred to with "who" instead of "that"
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585295
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Committed

Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 1, ยง "Require my password to login, p. 19 (PDF p. 21)
Type: rewording suggestion

Manual has:
This is a good option for those that, for example, share their computer with 
other family members.

Since "those" refers to people, "who" could be used instead of "that":
This is a good option for those who, for example, share their computer with 
other family members.

I have no objection to this being marked "Won't Fix" since there isn't anything 
*wrong* with the current wording, but I think "who" flows better and is more 
specific for translation and readers with second-language English.



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