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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Committed Bug description: Rev. 788 Ch.1, ยง "Installing Ubuntu", p. 14 (PDF p.16) Type: grammar Manual currently has: The process of installing Ubuntu is designed to be quick and easy, however, we realize that some people may find the idea a little daunting. There are two separate clauses there that should, at the very least, be separated by a semicolon (before "however"). Personally, I would go as far as to split it into two separate sentences, to emphasize the point made in the first, and then move the "however" into the second one a little too: The process of installing Ubuntu is designed to be quick and easy. We realize, however, that some people may find the idea a little daunting. _______________________________________________ Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual-bugs Post to : [email protected] Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual-bugs More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp
