** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Status: New => In Progress
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Assignee: (unassigned) => Jason.Cook599 (jason-cook599)
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Unnecessarily divisive comma, and other wording, p.59
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/586286
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: In Progress
Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "History", p. 59 (PDF p. 61)
Type: grammar/style
Manual has:
Click on one of the item categories in the sidebar to expand this category, and
see the pages you’ve visited during that time period.
Category expansion and page seeing constitute the result of a single
action—clicking an item—so shouldn't be separated by a comma when joined by
"and". Also, "this category" is repetitive, and "item categories" can be more
meaningful, while "you've visited" and "time period" can both be shortened.
Suggestion:
Click on one of the date categories in the sidebar to expand it, revealing the
pages you visited during that period.
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