** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Assignee: (unassigned) => Jason.Cook599 (jason-cook599)
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Status: New => In Progress
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Reorder for clarity, and use a comma after "for example", p.62
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/586358
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: In Progress
Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 3, ยง "Setting up your Sending options", p. 62 (PDF p. 64)
Types: style; grammar
Manual has:
Enter your username below, in the Username field, for example joe.x.user, or
[email protected].
"For example" should be followed by a comma. It might also be better next to
"username", since that's what the example is actually of.
Below that, enter your username, for example, joe.x.user, or
[email protected], in the Username field.
OR
Below that, in the Username field, enter your username, for example,
joe.x.user, or [email protected].
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