Based on https://help.ubuntu.com/11.10/ubuntu-help/unity-introduction.html:
"the Dash" -Mario Burgos On Mon, Nov 7, 2011 at 4:28 PM, Rick Fosburgh <[email protected]> wrote: > > So, > > Regarding terminology, should it be called: Dash, dash, the Dash, or the > dash? > > I don't know that we have clear guidance. > > > Rickfosb > > > > > > > Sent from my iPad > > On Nov 7, 2011, at 3:04 PM, andy hayden <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi again, > > I went through Draft 5 (trying not to repeat the comments which I made in > Draft 4), @Hannie in passing I commented on the highlighted bits without > comments (at least what I thought they could be). > > Things which jump out: > Chapter 3, section "All The Applications You Need" is quite inconsistent > and many of the app-type subsections run into wild opinion! It could really > do with a structure (for each app-type) and an overall aim for the > section... I found it very hard to understand/read. > > "Reading and composing email" section is really tough to read: it's > missing capitalisation, bolding and emphasis (though I think the content is > good). > > Large pictures center across the entire page rather than center across the > text (which looks strange), perhaps these large pictures should be shrunk? > > The naming convention chosen in its chapter is "Dash" rather than "dash", > "the dash", "the dash", "the Dash", or "The Dash" (all are in use somewhere > in the text! :) ) > > Many sections use the bolding/italic special character > incorrectly, and > have instead used quotations ' ' (these look even stranger as quotations > should be ` '). The majority of the manual where these are used correctly > is very easy to read, and I suspect user-friendly - once the reader has the > hang of it! > > Sorry everything seems negative, but all the other things are coming along > great! > Andy > > On 7 November 2011 18:51, c7p <[email protected]> wrote: > >> Yeah i think that's a common issue. I remember when i was trying to get >> the Greek manual built, that was one "traditional" bug -Kevin fixed such >> bugs pretty quickly-. >> >> Have a nice week ! >> --John >> >> 2011/11/7 [email protected] <[email protected]> >> >> Hey all, >>> >>> Im just looking through the online draft now, and I notice that all of >>> the references are incorrect. e.g. My section on Using Instant Messaging is >>> listed in the Table of Contents as page 66, but appears on page 68 in the >>> text. >>> I have reason to believe that the LaTeX file compiler was only run once >>> (Am I correct in assuming this?). Typically when a TeX document is compiled >>> with complex references, it needs to be 're compiled' so that the TOC could >>> be loaded correctly. >>> >>> That said, its no big deal to simply run it twice before the final draft >>> is published, and it shouldn't really affect any of the edits that we are >>> currently doing, but it is something important to keep in mind when anyone >>> is compiling the TeX from source. >>> >>> Ill push the edits to the Troubleshooting section that I have made after >>> I get home from work tonight. :) >>> >>> Cheers, >>> Thomas Swartz >>> >>> No trees were killed to send this message, but a large number of >>> electrons were terribly inconvenienced. >>> >>> >>> On Mon, Nov 7, 2011 at 7:03 AM, c7p <[email protected]> wrote: >>> >>>> >>>> >>>> 2011/11/7 andy hayden <[email protected]> >>>> >>>>> Hi, >>>>> >>>>> I added many comments to Draft 4 (http://crocodoc.com/Oog1F8n) last >>>>> week, none of which appear to have been addressed in Draft 5. >>>>> >>>>> many thanks >>>>> Andy >>>>> >>>>> On 7 November 2011 09:50, lafeber-dumoleyn2 < >>>>> [email protected]> wrote: >>>>> >>>>>> ** >>>>>> Hi, >>>>>> I have added some comment here: https://crocodoc.com/FcDBmlM. >>>>>> I can see in this document that text is highlighted, but there is no >>>>>> comment. It is not always clear what the problem is. >>>>>> Hannie >>>>>> >>>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>>> Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual >>>>>> Post to : [email protected] >>>>>> Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual >>>>>> More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>> >>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>> Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual >>>>> Post to : [email protected] >>>>> Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual >>>>> More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp >>>>> >>>>> >>>> @Andy: Thanks for the info, we'll make the changes asap. >>>> >>>> @Hannie: I don't know why this is happening, i guess you would have to >>>> add comments again if they are necessary -double-work isn't the most >>>> pleasing thing- :/. >>>> >>>> --John >>>> >>>> _______________________________________________ >>>> Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual >>>> Post to : [email protected] >>>> Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual >>>> More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp >>>> >>>> >>> >> > _______________________________________________ > Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual > Post to : [email protected] > Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual > More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp > > > _______________________________________________ > Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual > Post to : [email protected] > Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual > More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp > >
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