Ok, remind me never to ask Phil again if he can see any mistakes! I'm just kidding Phil. :D
The licensing is fine, the magazine is also CC-SA (v3) All the items below are now corrected. Anyone spot any other mistakes before I compile the final PDF ? On Thursday 12 April 2007 11:08, Phil Bull wrote: > Hi Ronnie, > > It looks great! I proof read the first 2/3 of it and found the following > (mostly very small) errors or typos: > > * p1 - "Ubuntu 7.04 - Whats Hot" -> "Ubuntu 7.04 - What's Hot" > * p2 - "Easier Install of Binary Drivers" -> "Easier Installation of > Binary Drivers" > * p2 - "How to contribute to fullcircle" -> "How to contribute to full > circle" (?) > * p3 - "For a window manager, Ubuntu used Gnome" -> Gnome=GNOME, and > GNOME is a desktop, not just a window manager. > * p3 - "Warty Warthog being the first" -> "Warty Warthog was the first" > * p4 - "its orange and brown" -> "orange and brown" > * p4 - Final sentence about LiveCD - I think others were offering > LiveCDs, just no major desktop distros. > * p5 - "dark by todays standards" -> "dark by today's standards" > * p5 - "LiveCD's for 64-bit" -> "Live CDs for 64-bit" > * p5 - "Power PC's" -> "PowerPC" > * p5 - "Kubuntu, this was" -> "Kubuntu. This was" > * p5 - "Gnome" -> "GNOME" > * p6 - "squarely at the educational establishments" -> "squarely at > educational establishments" (?) > * p6 - "(package manager)" -> "(a package manager)" > * p6 - "became first" -> "became the first" > * p6 - "Also added was KDE Bluetooth" -> "KDE Bluetooth was also > added" (?) > * p7 - "half yearly" -> "half-yearly" > * p7 - "LiveCD" -> "Live CD" (now called Desktop CD) > * p7 - "hard drives but" -> "hard drives, but" > * p7 - "could install" -> "could also install" > * p7 - "Gnome" -> "GNOME" > * p7 - "resources Xubuntu" -> "resources, Xubuntu" > * p8 - "F-spot" -> "F-Spot" > * p8 - "software; digiKam," -> "software (digiKam)," > * p9 - "codecs, binary drivers" -> "codecs and binary drivers" > * p9 - "contacts, Yahoo" -> "contacts and Yahoo" > * p9 - "them in Ubuntu" -> "then into Ubuntu" > * p9 - "dual partition" -> "dual-boot setup" (?) > * p9 - "and their strengths" -> "and their signal strengths" > * p9 - "instantly, via" -> "instantly via" > * p9 - "local network with no configuration." -> "local network, > without configuration." > * p10 - "codecs for you, no" -> "codecs for you; no" > * p11 - "to determine to which" -> "to determine which" > * p11 - "Othello didn't" -> "Othello, didn't" > * p12 - The main difference with the new Help Centre is the topic-based > help. Help is now split into bitesize chunks, which are > straight-to-the-point and mean that you don;t have to read pages of > writing to find the instructions you were after. > * p13 - "Easier install of binary drivers" -> "Easier installation of > binary drivers" (I understand that this may be because of space > restrictions in the layout) > * p13 - "Manager allow users" -> "Manager allows users" > * p13 - "manage binary drivers of" -> "manage the binary drivers > of" (?) > > Also, there is a large gap on page 3, could it be filled with a release > timeline or some project logos maybe? And before I forget, do you need > me to relicense any of my images or are you OK with the license (IIRC, > CC-BY-SA 2.5)? > > Thanks again for your great work, > > Phil > > -- > Phil Bull > http://www.launchpad.net/people/philbull -- Cheerio! Ronnie e : [EMAIL PROTECTED] w : www.RonnieTucker.co.uk -- ubuntu-marketing mailing list [EMAIL PROTECTED] Modify settings or unsubscribe at: https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-marketing
