Review: Needs Fixing
A few small things I noticed.
- can you add a space (" ") after each sentence and closed parentheses?
- I'm not sure we'd want to recommend "testing emails" - if we do, we
should also explain how to add new key IDs or remove ones you don't
like any more
- maybe we should link to some password advice instead of giving it
ourselves - I immediately thought of http://xkcd.com/936/ :-)
- personally I think I'd prefer "which" to "what" in the first
sentence, but I'm not a native speaker, so somebody else might want
to weigh in.
Thanks for your work on this, you made this easier to read! :)
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