On Fri, Dec 23, 2011 at 6:06 PM, Tony Pursell <a...@princeswalk.fsnet.co.uk> wrote: > Hi Grant > > On 23 December 2011 17:39, Grant Phillips-Sewell <dcg...@cornwall-it.co.uk> > wrote: >> >> On Fri, Dec 23, 2011 at 4:56 PM, Alan Pope <alan.p...@canonical.com> >> wrote: >> > On 22/12/11 21:59, paul sutton wrote: >> >> >> >> Yeah, would canonical agree to something like that on the cd wallets ? >> >> >> >> >> > The picasa link didn't work for me so can't see it. >> >> Sorry about that... I renamed the "folder" in which the image was >> stored. I'm now keeping all Ubuntu-related images here: >> >> >> https://picasaweb.google.com/100100192569274200897/UbuntuImages?authkey=Gv1sRgCPz17P6AkPXE_gE >> > > Just a couple of observations on the CD wallet. The text beginning 'You are > legally entitled...' could imply, for some people, that you are not legally > entitled to copy and distribute for commercial and business use, i.e just > personal use. > > I would avoid acronyms like 'GUI'. You and I know full well what they mean, > others may not. I would just say 'User Interface'. But even that is a bit > too much like jargon. > > Tony
Hi Tony, I've chopped it about a bit now. I've replaced the back-cover text with (slightly modified for the sake of positioning) text taken from some parts of Ubuntu.com. I've also replaced the CoF with the officially sanctioned versions and the Ubuntu text with the officially sanctioned versions. I have also used the Ubuntu font for the majority of the text. I've removed the QR code. Here's the new, updated version: https://picasaweb.google.com/lh/photo/DHDh_De-YDATz-lgUbd-dPeaBY9XKpSLopCPO5tPlWM?feat=directlink The "folder" containing my Ubuntu-related images (including the original, from yesterday) is here: https://picasaweb.google.com/100100192569274200897/UbuntuImages?authuser=0&authkey=Gv1sRgCPz17P6AkPXE_gE&feat=directlink Can we please note that Paul's original discussion was related to the use of QRcodes on Ubuntu CD wallets. I have removed the QRcode from this DVD case insert because I'm not sure it's particularly useful in the situation that these discs will be used. Although what I have produced here is a DVD case insert, so kinda related, I believe the two discussions (this one, and mine regarding DVD Booklets) have become somewhat entangled. Incidentally, if anyone wants the Gimp XCF file for this DVD case insert, let me know and I'll upload it someplace. Grant. -- ubuntu-uk@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-uk https://wiki.ubuntu.com/UKTeam/
