Further changes implemented and the reasoning behind:

Changed "remain" to "stand" in the opening statement; seemed the consensus.

Went with "many millions"; "untold" begged the question, "Well, why
aren't they telling?"

Changed "creative tools" in ~Business to "productive"; "creative" is
more art school, "productive" more business.

If there is additional comment, "speak now or forever hold your peace".
Okay, "forever" might be a bit much. How about until the fifth Wednesday
in June, 2014?

JVLB


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