Jörn,

I'm attaching my edits of the docbook for this. Since attachments aren't allowed on our mailing lists, I'm copying you directly also :-)

You can apply the patch and then do a compare-with-base-revision to see everything I changed.

Cheers. -Marshall
Index: 
C:/a/Eclipse/3.3/apache/CasEditor/docbook/casEditorUserGuide/casEditorUserGuide.xml
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--- 
C:/a/Eclipse/3.3/apache/CasEditor/docbook/casEditorUserGuide/casEditorUserGuide.xml
 (revision 620694)
+++ 
C:/a/Eclipse/3.3/apache/CasEditor/docbook/casEditorUserGuide/casEditorUserGuide.xml
 (working copy)
@@ -35,9 +35,11 @@
 
                <para>
                        The CAS Editor is an annotation tool which supports 
manual and automatic
-                       annotation of CAS files. The CAS Editor can visualize 
and edit feature structures 
-                       including annotations which can be viewed and edited
-                       directly on text. Currently only text based CAS are 
supported.
+                       annotation (via running UIMA annotators) of CAS files.
+      Currently only text-based CAS are supported. 
+      The CAS Editor can visualize and edit all feature structures. 
+      Feature Structures which are annotations can additionally be viewed and 
edited
+                       directly on text. 
                </para>
 
                <screenshot>
@@ -54,15 +56,15 @@
                <title>Projects</title>
 
                <para>
-                       The CAS Editor organizes all artifacts in a project. It 
is
+                       The CAS Editor organizes all artifacts in one or more 
projects. It is
                        not possible to open artifacts which are located 
outside of
-                       the project.
+                       a project.
                </para>
 
                <section id="ugr.tools.cas_editor.pojects.structure">
                        <title>Project structure</title>
 
-                       <para>The project can be composed of these 
elements:</para>
+                       <para>A project includes these elements:</para>
 
                        <para>
                                <itemizedlist>
@@ -87,7 +89,7 @@
                                        <listitem>
                                                <para>
                                                        <emphasis>CAS 
file</emphasis>
-                                                       The CAS itself, it must 
be located in a
+                                                       The CAS itself.  It 
must be located in a
                                                        corpus folder and must 
end with ".xcas" to
                                                        be recognized as a CAS 
file. Currently only
                                                        xcas files are 
supported.
@@ -97,10 +99,10 @@
                                        <listitem>
                                                <para>
                                                        <emphasis>CAS Processor 
folder</emphasis>
-                                                       A processor folder 
contains the Analysis
-                                                       Engine and Consumer 
Descriptor files. The
-                                                       CAS processor folder is 
also the data path
-                                                       for the processors. A 
project can have
+                                                       A processor folder 
contains Analysis
+                                                       Engine and CAS Consumer 
Descriptors. The
+                                                       CAS processor folder is 
also put on the data path
+                                                       for the processors when 
they are run.  A project can have
                                                        multiple processor 
folders.
                                                </para>
                                        </listitem>
@@ -137,7 +139,7 @@
                                and folders in the corpus explorer view. In 
addition to
                                the listed elements a project can also contain 
files and
                                folders e.g. for documentation. If one of these 
special
-                               elements contains an error a marker which 
describes the
+                               elements contains an error, a marker which 
describes the
                                problem is added to the file.
                        </para>
 
@@ -166,7 +168,7 @@
                        <title>Add a type system</title>
                        <para>
                                Its strongly recommended to first add a valid 
type system
-                               to the project other functions are only 
available if the
+                               to the project; other functions are only 
available if the
                                type system is present. Use copy and paste to 
import an
                                existing type system. Editing of the type 
system is
                                currently not supported inside the CAS Editor.
@@ -175,13 +177,13 @@
                        <note>
                                <para>
                                        If an external text editor is used to 
modify the
-                                       type system close all editors inside 
the CAS Editor
+                                       type system, close all editors inside 
the CAS Editor
                                        and run the refresh action.
                                </para>
                        </note>
 
                        <para>
-                               After the type system file is added make the 
CAS Editor
+                               After the type system file is added, you need 
to make the CAS Editor
                                aware of its existence. To do this open the 
Properties
                                dialog for the project and then select the type 
system as
                                shown here:
@@ -207,14 +209,14 @@
                        <para>
                                To add a corpus folder first create a new 
folder. Then
                                open the Properties dialog and add the folder 
to the
-                               list of corpus folders. It than appears as 
corpus folder
+                               list of corpus folders. It than appears as a 
corpus folder
                                in the corpus explorer.
                        </para>
                        
                        <para>
-                               The corpus explorer automatically hides all non 
CAS
+                               The corpus explorer automatically hides all 
non-CAS
                                files in the corpus folder. The CAS files are 
organized
-                               in a flat hierarchy sub folders which contain 
CAS files
+                               in a flat hierarchy; sub folders which contain 
CAS files
                                are not shown.
                        </para>
                </section>
@@ -231,34 +233,39 @@
                <section id="ugr.tools.cas_editor.annotation_editor.editor">
                        <title>Editor</title>
                        <para>
-                               The editor has a edit mode. By default the 
editor only
+                               The editor has an associated, changable CAS 
Type.
+        This type is called the editor "mode".
+        By default the editor only
                                shows annotation of this type. Actions and 
views are
-                               sensitive to the edit mode. To switch the type 
of edit
-                               mode use the "Mode" menu in the editor context 
menu. The
-                               editor can also show other annotation which 
have not the
-                               type of the edit mode. For this use the "Show" 
menu in
+                               sensitive to this mode. To change the
+        mode for the editor, use the "Mode" menu in the editor context menu. 
+        </para>
+      <para>
+        The editor can also show annotations of other Types.  
+        To do this, use the "Show" menu in
                                the context menu. The annotation renderer and 
rendering
                                layer can be changed in the Properties dialog. 
After the
                                change all editors should be re-opened.
                        </para>
                        <para>
-                               The editor automatically selects annotations 
near the
-                               cursor of the edit mode. This selection is then
+                               The editor automatically selects annotations of 
the
+        editor mode Type that are near the
+                               cursor. This selection is then
                                synchronized or displayed in other views.
                        </para>
                        <para>
-                               To create an annotation mark a piece of text 
and then
-                               press the enter key. The annotation now has the 
bounds
-                               of the selection and the type of the edit mode.
+                               To create an annotation manually using the 
editor, mark a piece of text and then
+                               press the enter key. This creates an annotation 
of the 
+        type of the editor mode, having bounds corresponding to the selection.
                        </para>
                        <para>
-                               It is also possible to choose the annotation 
type, press
+                               It is also possible to choose the annotation 
type; press
                                shift + enter for this. Then a dialog asks for 
the
-                               annotation type.
+                               annotation type to create.
                        </para>
                        <para>
                                To delete an annotation select it and press the 
delete
-                               key. Only annotations of the edit mode can be 
selected.
+                               key. Only annotations of the editor mode can be 
selected.
                        </para>
                        <screenshot>
                                <mediaobject>
@@ -273,8 +280,8 @@
                <section id="ugr.tools.cas_editor.annotation_editor.outline">
                        <title>Outline view</title>
                        <para>
-                               The outline lists the annotations of the 
current edit
-                               mode of the editor. There are actions to 
increase or
+                               The outline lists the annotations of the 
current editor
+                               mode. There are actions to increase or
                                decrease the bounds of the selected annotation. 
There is
                                also an action to merge all selected 
annotations.
                        </para>
@@ -293,7 +300,7 @@
                        
id="ugr.tools.cas_editor.annotation_editor.properties_view">
                        <title>Edit Views</title>
                        <para>
-                               The Edit Views are showing details about the 
currently
+                               The Edit Views show details about the currently
                                selected annotations or feature structures. It 
is
                                possible to change primitive values in this 
view.
                                Referenced feature structures can be created 
and deleted
@@ -315,8 +322,8 @@
                <section id="ugr.tools.cas_editor.annotation_editor.fs_view">
                        <title>FeatureStructure View</title>
                        <para>
-                               The FeatureStructure View list all feature 
structures of
-                               a certain type. The type is selected in the type
+                               The FeatureStructure View lists all feature 
structures of
+                               a specified type. The type is selected in the 
type
                                combobox.
                        </para>
                        
@@ -338,18 +345,18 @@
        <chapter id="sandbox.caseditor.cas_processor_integration">
                <title>Cas processor integration</title>
                <para>
-                       The Analysis Engine can be run against a whole corpus 
or a
-                       few CAS files. To do this select a corpus or CAS files 
and
+                       An Analysis Engine can be run against either a whole 
corpus or just a
+                       few CAS files. To do this select a corpus or some CAS 
files and
                        then choose in the context menu the correct Analysis 
Engine.
                        The filename of the Analysis Engine must end with ".ann"
                        otherwise it is not recognized as an Analysis Engine.
                </para>
 
                <para>
-                       The Consumer can be fed with the CAS files inside a 
corpus.
+                       The CAS Consumer can be fed with the CAS files loaded 
from a corpus.
                        To do this select a corpus and then select the consumer 
in
-                       the context menu. To add a Consumer Descriptor paste a 
file
-                       into the processor folder. The filename must end with 
".con"
+                       the context menu. To add a CAS Consumer Descriptor 
paste a file
+                       into the processor folder. The filename must end with 
".con";
                        otherwise it is not recognized as consumer.
                </para>
        </chapter>

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