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revno: 1453
committer: Steve Langasek <[email protected]>
branch nick: upstream
timestamp: Fri 2013-03-15 11:16:08 -0700
message:
  Manpage wordsmithing/tweaking
modified:
  extra/man/file-event.7


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=== modified file 'extra/man/file-event.7'
--- extra/man/file-event.7	2013-03-15 12:44:29 +0000
+++ extra/man/file-event.7	2013-03-15 18:16:08 +0000
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
 event is generated by the
 .BR upstart\-file\-bridge (8)
 daemon when a file whose details match the
-file event condition and environment specified in a jobs
+file event condition and environment specified in a job's
 .B start on
 or
 .B stop on
@@ -33,10 +33,6 @@
 .B delete
 depending on what type of file event caused the event to be emitted.
 
-The
-.B FEVENT
-environment variable will be set to the value of the corresponding
-
 If the job specified a glob pattern in the file part of the
 .B FPATH
 environment variable, the event will contain the
@@ -53,8 +49,8 @@
 .\"
 .IP \(bu
 .B FPATH
-values specified by jobs are not canonicalised; they cannot be reliably as
-they may not exist so cannot be fully resolved.
+values specified by jobs are not canonicalised; this cannot be done reliably
+as they may not exist so cannot be fully resolved.
 .\"
 .IP \(bu
 If you wish to match on
@@ -74,8 +70,8 @@
 Event emitted when files within a directory are created, modified or
 deleted.
 .IP "start on file FPATH=/var/crash/*.crash FEVENT=created"
-Event emitted when files in a directory matching a glob pattern are
-created.
+Event emitted when files that match a glob pattern are created in the
+indicated directory.
 .IP "start on file FPATH=""/this/path/contains whitespace.txt"""
 Specify a file that contains a space character.
 .\"

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