Small corrections
3.
Check whether the new VLAN range overlaps with any existing ones.
If overlaps, extend the existing range. If does not overlap, add the new range.
missing subject in the phrases
If it overlaps, extend the existing range. If it does not overlap, add the new range.

5.
On Zones, click View More, then click the zone to which you want to work with
"with which" is the way to get rid of the dangling participal
On Zones, click View More, then click the zone with which you want to work.

9. Specify the start and end of the VLAN range in comma-separated list.
need an "a".
9. Specify the start and end of the VLAN range in  a comma-separated list.

Might be clearer since the list only contains 2 items
9. Enter the start and end of the VLAN range separate by commas.


Ron

On 08/08/2013 1:44 AM, Radhika Puthiyetath wrote:
Thanks Bharat. I have incorporated the changes.

The latest guide is attached at 
https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/CLOUDSTACK-804

From: Bharat Kumar
Sent: Friday, August 02, 2013 11:14 AM
To: Radhika Puthiyetath
Cc: Kiran Koneti
Subject: Re: [Doc] Non Contiguous VLAN Ranges for Review

Hi Radhika,

The vlan rages implementation has also changed recently.

The Ui is also going to change.  here is the updated detail.

In order to add the vlan rages user has to send all the vlan rages including 
the one he wants to add.
the input  should be a coma separated list of vlan ranges.  All the vlans 
missing form the input will be removed if not in use.



On Aug 2, 2013, at 10:52 AM, Radhika Puthiyetath 
<radhika.puthiyet...@citrix.com<mailto:radhika.puthiyet...@citrix.com>>
  wrote:


Hi,

Non Contiguous VLAN Ranges documentation is ready for review. The doc is 
attached at https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/CLOUDSTACK-804.

Please see section 11.9.2. Non Contiguous VLAN Ranges (88), and provide your 
feedback.

Regards
-Radhika






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