> Like I said, it's still a draft.  If you could take a minute to glance
> through it and give suggestions for changes, I'd really appreciate it.

really nitpicky:

in section 6, need a comma after "no matter what"

i don't know if this is necessary or not, but if they have to go into
the bios for setting up network booting, might want to have a spot for

"how to get into the bios".  i know that on some computers i've worked
on in the past, figuring this out can be a pain, and once one person
figures it out, it's good to have it down...

also, i'm assuming that we'll just use the back for information about
what we've done as far as troubleshooting?  (in case, for example, i try
to resolve a problem, and can't, so they have to wait for someone with
mor experience... might be good if we just had a standard place where
it's understood (maybe through a note at the bottom or something) that
the next person to come around can find what's been tried so far?

i've never done network booting...  does it happen automatically once
you set the bios correctly? or is there something else we'll have to do?
If there's something else, you might want to explain it a tad better...
if not, you might want to mention it

maybe add a section for "make sure that both linux and windows are
working correctly"

i second the idea for having a "congratulations" section... i think
that we can use this sheet to keep the person that is having it
installed involved, and help them understand what's going on, and it
might be helpful to have the encouragement for them.  also, we should
put something saying that they might want to hold onto the sheet because
some of the info on there will be very helpful if they have problems in
the future...


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