On Tue, May 10 2022, "Michael S. Tsirkin" <m...@redhat.com> wrote:

> Paul Knight wrote:
>
> In running a link check, I noted several issues, none significant for this
> initial public review publication:
> - broken link in Normative references:
> -- [S390 Common I/O] ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM
> Publication SA22-7204,
> http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS, and any
> future revisions
> (This link is currently broken, and I could not find any alternative source 
> for
> this document. - please rewrite the reference to indicate document is no 
> longer
> available at this link. You may also consider whether the solitary citation at
> 4.3.1.3 is still needed.)
> This broken link is not a blocking issue for a Committee specification Draft,
> but it will not be allowed for a Committee Specification.
>
> Reported-by: Paul Knight <paul.kni...@oasis-open.org>
> Suggested-by: Halil Pasic <pa...@linux.ibm.com>
> Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin <m...@redhat.com>
> ---
>  introduction.tex | 3 ++-
>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)
>
> diff --git a/introduction.tex b/introduction.tex
> index 4dc7085..0a78e78 100644
> --- a/introduction.tex
> +++ b/introduction.tex
> @@ -45,7 +45,8 @@ \section{Normative References}\label{sec:Normative 
> References}
>  IDentifier (UUID) URN Namespace'', RFC 4122, DOI 10.17487/RFC4122,
>  July 2005. \newline\url{http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc4122.txt}\\
>       \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 PoP}\textbf{[S390 PoP]} & 
> z/Architecture Principles of Operation, IBM Publication SA22-7832, 
> \newline\url{http://publibfi.boulder.ibm.com/epubs/pdf/dz9zr009.pdf}, and any 
> future revisions\\
> -     \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 Common I/O}\textbf{[S390 Common I/O]} 
> & ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication SA22-7204, 
> \newline\url{http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS},
>  and any future revisions\\
> +     \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 Common I/O}\textbf{[S390
> +Common I/O]} & ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM 
> Publication SA22-7204-01, 
> \newline\url{https://www.ibm.com/resources/publications/OutputPubsDetails?PubID=SA22720401},
>  and any future revisions\\

Ok, in the context diff I see that we don't use any suffix for the PoP,
so I guess that we shouldn't use a suffix here, either.

>       \phantomsection\label{intro:PCI}\textbf{[PCI]} &
>       Conventional PCI Specifications,
>       \newline\url{http://www.pcisig.com/specifications/conventional/},


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