I wrote:

. . . if you know someone who knows someone who knows Pelosi . . .

BETTER YET:

If you know someone who knows someone who knows Pelosi's science adviser . . .

Skip the high official. Go to the scientist who has his or her ear.

Even when you write to a scientist you must keep the message very short and to-the-point. Don't waste a word. Don't make them dig to learn what you are talking about. Be explicit.

It reminds me of old-fashioned advice about how to give an after-dinner speech:

Be witty. Be brief. Be seated.

- Jed

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