hi

> * Tell me if you like it (am I on the right track?) and

yeah, looks good


> * What can be done to improve it?  I.e. if I'm on the wrong track, where
> should I be, and if I'm on the right track, what kinds of adjustments can
> you suggest?

you maybe should try to use more colors ?


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regards,
Georges Toth

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