On Tue, Sep 20, 2011 at 1:30 PM, SM <s...@resistor.net> wrote:

> Under Status of this Memo:
>
>   This Internet-Draft is submitted in full conformance with the
>   provisions of BCP 78 and BCP 79.
>
> Section 10 of RFC 2026 has been updated by newer RFCs.
>
> The Copyright Notice should be according to the IETF Trust legal provisions.
>  This can be generated automatically ( see
> www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-editor/intro_xml2rfc.pdf ).

I didn't write that text, it was auto-generated by the xml2rfc tool
itself. If that tool does the wrong thing, we should poke its
maintainer...

> In terms of style, the requirement (SHOULD) should not be directed to the
> reader.  You could rewrite that as:
>
>  The certificate SHOULD be revoked by whatever means

Ok.

>  "CDNs MAY, and SHOULD, also use certificate pinning independently of
>  any of their customers."
>
> There is always some long discussion in the IETF about RFC 2119.  To keep it
> simple, don't say MAY and SHOULD do X.  The MAY is not needed in this case.

Done.

> As you are defining a new HTTP header field, add an IANA Considerations
> section for it to be registered.  You can deal with that as the work on the
> I-D progresses.

Well, it's an extension to the HSTS header field, not a whole new field.
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