Hiya Rainer, Thanks for your time to review, my comments inline.
Rainer Heilke wrote: > michelle olson wrote: >> Hi all, >> >> Thanks so much for your feedback and suggestions yesterday. I have >> attempted to incorporate and/or resolve all of your changes to the >> text and landing pages. Please have a look and let me know what you >> think, any and all ideas welcomed. >> >> http://opensolaris.org/os/project/website/splash2 >> >> Thanks in advance for your time! > > Hey Michelle! > > On page > http://opensolaris.org/os/project/website/splash2/os_community_code/ > in the releases table, the OpenSolaris 2008.05 link does not take one > where they'd expect to go. where would you expect to go? > > In the same table, the "Solaris Express Community Edition" link takes > one to the correct place, but said place is titled "Using OpenSolaris" > - just a little confusing. Also, the first link is for the OpenSolaris > Developer Preview, not SXCE. I think I fixed this, can you dbl-check if it makes sense now? > > I don't see a link to the genunix documentation on the "Find help with > OpenSolaris" page. I think that would be very useful. got it, thanks. -Michelle > > I think Janice already mentioned another item I saw. > > Finally - and I know this is both too late and nothing to do with you > - what's with the bubble logo? I saw it when it was first proposed, > and neither saw competitive ideas nor a vote on it. Maybe I've just > been more out of touch than I thought. Simply put, though, "I don't > get it." It looks a little silly, and is nothing a community can > develop an identity around. IMO > > Thanks for the good work, and my apologies I wasn't able to give > feedback to round one. > > Rainer _______________________________________________ website-discuss mailing list website-discuss@opensolaris.org
