On 2008?10?14? 08:29, John Plocher wrote:
Michelle Olson wrote:
http://opensolaris.org/os/project/website/content/home_page_draft12/
Nit: Could you use names that mean something for these drafts, like
.../feature_spot_pl_conference_draft
Let me know what you think.
I really like the drop shadowed picture!
How much of "in Szczecin, ul. Korsarzy 34 Sala Anny Jagiellonki, Zamek
Ksia;z.a;t Pomorskich, Wste;p wolny" is a city location and how much is
a street address? I'd leave off the details (which should be on the
conference page as well) in favor of simplicity (in the same way we'd
say "come to JavaOne in San Francisco" or maybe "come to JavaOne at
the Moscone in San Francisco", but not "Come to JavaOne in the
basement of the Moscone Conference Center, 747 Howard Street, San
Francisco, CA between 3rd and 4th streets"
yah, I like shortening that first sentence, too. Great that we are
putting so much community stuff on the front page ...
Jim
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