On 01/08/09 13:15, Peter Tribble wrote:
> On Thu, Jan 8, 2009 at 8:42 PM, Michelle Olson <[email protected]> wrote:
>   
>> Hi all,
>>
>> I've drafted a feature spot for the Crossbow project here:
>>
>> http://opensolaris.org/os/project/website/content/home_page_draft_22/
>>
>> Let me know what you think.
>>     
>
> It's good.
>
> One problem I have is that the graphic is quite wide. That's fine, but the 
> first
> paragraph is squeezed to the right of the image at one word per line.
> Is it possible
> to simply have the image at the top and have all the text underneath rather 
> than
> trying to flow it round?
>
> Nits: the networking group link doesn't work (trailing " not /). The
> Docs link has prject
> misspelt in the url.
>
>   
Thanks for the feedback Peter, I've changed the layout according to your 
suggestion and fixed the broken links in the draft. Let me know if this 
looks better/worse to you.

Regards,
Michelle
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