On Sun, Nov 4, 2012 at 11:43 PM, Marc Paré <m...@marcpare.com> wrote:
> Le 2012-11-03 13:26, > bugzilla-daemon@freedesktop.**org<bugzilla-dae...@freedesktop.org>a écrit : > >> https://bugs.freedesktop.org/**show_bug.cgi?id=54478<https://bugs.freedesktop.org/show_bug.cgi?id=54478> >> >> Priority: medium >> Bug ID: 54478 >> CC: website@global.libreoffice.org >> Assignee: >> libreoffice-bugs@lists.**freedesktop.org<libreoffice-b...@lists.freedesktop.org> >> Summary: Clarity& Grammar issue on front page of >> LibreOffice.org >> Severity: normal >> Classification: Unclassified >> OS: All >> Reporter: write2da...@gmail.com >> Hardware: Other >> Status: NEW >> Version: unspecified >> Component: WWW >> Product: LibreOffice >> Ever confirmed: 1 >> Status: NEW >> >> This is a graphic that shows up on the homepage... >> >> >> https://www.libreoffice.org/**assets/Shared/** >> LibOWebsiteBannersDonationEngl**ish400px.png<https://www.libreoffice.org/assets/Shared/LibOWebsiteBannersDonationEnglish400px.png> >> >> >> "operational running" doesn't make sense& isn't proper grammar >> >> --- Comment #1 from Mas<airtime...@yahoo.com> --- >> I agree, I am going to send this to the website team to update >> >> The image is located at the top right hand corner of >> >> http://www.libreoffice.org/ >> >> > Considering it must fit the space allowed by the image (approx. 72 > characters), some suggestions: > > > "Consider donating to LibreOffice to fund our infrastructure and ..." > > or > > "Consider donating to LibreOffice to help fund our services and more!" > > or > > "Help us develop and grow LibreOffice with your generous donations ..." > > or > > "LibreOffice is growing with your generous contributions ..." > > or > > "Consider donating to LibreOffice development, infrastructure and ..." > > Cheers, > > Marc > > -- > Marc Paré > m...@marcpare.com > http://www.parEntreprise.com > parEntreprise.com Supports OpenDocument Formats (ODF) > parEntreprise.com Supports http://www.LibreOffice.org > > > "Help us develop and grow LibreOffice with your generous donations ..." :) This one sounds good -- -- Masekela Walls Web Security Analyst | Senior Server Administrator Powserve.com / Gemini ISP Networks -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to website+h...@global.libreoffice.org Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/website/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
