Seema Alevoor wrote:
>
> Hi,
> 
> Webrev is at http://cr.opensolaris.org/~seema/6631480/
> Please review.

usr/src/cmd/apache2/Solaris/apache2.1m.sunman

"The Apache 2 is integrated with Solaris."

   That seems redundant.. if I'm reading the manpage is because it's
   installed ;-) So do we need to point it out?

"Depending on your machine architecture, [isainfo] should be expanded
to either sparcv9 or amd64."

   Wording it that way forces you to change the manpage every time
   there is a different architecture. Better to just say it represents
   the output of 'isainfo -n'.


In the section listing directories, I suggesting adding
/etc/apache2/[version]/original/ with explanation that its contents
are delivered as-is from the apache distribution and these files are
not meant to be read by the server, they are there as examples for the
user.

SEE ALSO section has a link to "http://htto://www.apache.org";, correct
that.



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