Author: esr
Date: Thu Jul 5 21:30:28 2007
New Revision: 18666
URL: http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth?rev=18666&view=rev
Log:
Spelling and usage fixes.
Modified:
trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/09b_Judgement.cfg
Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/09b_Judgement.cfg
URL:
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/09b_Judgement.cfg?rev=18666&r1=18665&r2=18666&view=diff
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--- trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/09b_Judgement.cfg (original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Northern_Rebirth/scenarios/09b_Judgement.cfg Thu Jul
5 21:30:28 2007
@@ -8,15 +8,15 @@
[story]
[part]
- story= _ "Driven by an overwhelming desire to be released from
his torment, Tallin approached the Rod of Justice as it lay scattered admits
the Dragon's hoarded treasure. However, just as he was about to grasp it in his
trembling hands, he hesitated - fear and apprehension at last breaking through
his shroud of suffering - and he found himself unable to proceed. Abhai came
forth - his ethereal form gliding over the scattered treasure and the carcasses
of it's defenders - and fearlessly lifted the Rod in his ghostly hands. He
paused for a moment, as if savoring the familiar feel of it in his grasp once
more, and then presented it to Tallin."
+ story= _ "Driven by an overwhelming need to be released from
his torment, Tallin approached the Rod of Justice where it lay amidst the
Dragon's hoarded treasure. But as he was about to grasp it in his trembling
hands, he hesitated and found himself unable to proceed. Abhai came forth - his
ethereal form gliding over the scattered treasure and the carcases of its
defenders - and fearlessly lifted the Rod in his ghostly hands. He paused for a
moment, as if savoring the familiar feel of it in his grasp once more, and then
presented it to Tallin."
[/part]
[part]
- story= _ "Tallin raised his eyes to look into Abhai's and Abhai
met his gaze - confidence meeting uncertainty, faith meeting doubt, assurance
meeting apprehension. "I have faith in you my boy," Abhai said, "take this and
put your doubts at rest." Tallin held the gaze for one more long moment - and
then eagerly grasped the Rod of Justice in a white knuckled grip."
+ story= _ "Tallin raised his eyes to look into Abhai's and Abhai
met his gaze - confidence meeting uncertainty, faith meeting doubt, assurance
meeting apprehension. "I have faith in you, my boy," Abhai said, "Take this,
and put your doubts at rest." Tallin held the gaze for one more long moment -
and then took the Rod of Justice in a white-knuckled grip."
[/part]
[part]
- story= _ "Pain flooded through his being. A light, not bright
and not dark, but tremendously powerful blinded him through his clenched
eyelids. As his minions stared on blankly, as his whole being erupted in an
ethereal fire and his lean blazing form crumpled to the craven floor."
+ story= _ "Searing pain flooded through him. A light, not bright
and not dark, but tremendously powerful, blinded him through his clenched
eyelids. As his minions stared blankly, his entire being erupted in ethereal
fire and his physical form crumpled to the cavern floor."
[/part]
[/story]
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@
[message]
description=Betrayed Friend
- message= _ "You no longer look like a decomposing corpse. Strength and
vitality flows through your veins again does it not?"
+ message= _ "You no longer look like a decomposing corpse. Strength and
vitality flows through your veins again, does it not?"
[/message]
[message]
@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@
[message]
description=Betrayed Friend
- message= _ "Tallin, we are in a place beyond matter thought and time.
This is a place of unimaginable splendor, glory and happiness - indeed, this is
the realm of the Great Gods."
+ message= _ "Tallin, we are in a place beyond matter, thought, and time.
This is a place of unimaginable splendor, glory and transcendence - the very
realm of the Greater Gods."
[/message]
[message]
@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@
[message]
description=Betrayed Friend
- message= _ "Like I said Tallin this place is beyond matter, thought and
time. Your body is made up of matter, and so with that you aren't able to
perceive anything here."
+ message= _ "As I said, Tallin this place is beyond matter, thought, and
time. Your body is made of matter, which renders you unable to perceive
anything here."
[/message]
[message]
@@ -187,47 +187,47 @@
[message]
description=Betrayed Friend
- message= _ "Yes Tallin, you are not dead. The Great Gods have seen it
fit to give you another chance."
- [/message]
-
- [message]
- description=Tallin
- message= _ "Another chance, but why? What have I done except mislead
those who follow me and then betray and back-stab them at the worst possible
moment."
- [/message]
-
- [message]
- description=Betrayed Friend
- message= _ "I beg to differ Tallin. True, you didn't have the strength
of mind to resist Malifor's evil summons, but you can hardly be blamed for
that. And on the other hand, you have spent your entire life in preparation to
free your people from orcish enslavement. Practically every word, every
thought, every action from your boyhood up till your enslavement was dedicated
to this task, and this task is still incomplete."
- [/message]
-
- [message]
- description=Tallin
- message= _ "Incomplete you say. I would say I have failed."
- [/message]
-
- [message]
- description=Betrayed Friend
- message= _ "No Tallin, you have strayed surely, but you have not yet
failed. The fire you have kindled is still burning. Your people are still free
and fighting under the leadership of the Dwarvish Lord Hamel. As you have
yourself seen, they have managed to destroy Malifor and are even now trying to
reclaim Knalga from the chaos that it is in. However, their struggle with
Malifor has left them week and exhausted and in the meantime, a massive orcish
army rallies against them. Without assistance they will soon be overwhelmed and
the Northlands will once again be plunged into darkness and chaos."
+ message= _ "Nom Tallin, you are not dead. The Greater Gods have seen it
fit to give you another chance."
+ [/message]
+
+ [message]
+ description=Tallin
+ message= _ "Another chance, but why? What have I done except mislead
those who followed me, and then betray and back-stab them at the worst possible
moment?"
+ [/message]
+
+ [message]
+ description=Betrayed Friend
+ message= _ "I beg to differ Tallin. True, you did not have the strength
to resist Malifor's evil summons, but you can hardly be blamed for that. What
in your previous existence could have prepared you for such a trial? And, on
the other hand, you spent your entire life in preparation to free your people
from orcish enslavement. Every word, every thought, every action from your
boyhood up till your enslavement by Malifor was dedicated to this task, and
this task is still incomplete."
+ [/message]
+
+ [message]
+ description=Tallin
+ message= _ "Incomplete, you say. I would say I have failed."
+ [/message]
+
+ [message]
+ description=Betrayed Friend
+ message= _ "No, Tallin. You have strayed, surely, but you have not yet
failed. The fire you have kindled is still burning. Your people are still free
and fighting under the leadership of the Dwarvish Lord Hamel. As you have
yourself seen, they have destroyed Malifor and are even now trying to reclaim
Knalga from the grasp of the orcs. But their struggle with Malifor has left
them week and exhausted; and a massive orcish army rallies against them.
Without assistance, they will soon be overwhelmed and the Northlands will once
again be plunged into darkness and chaos."
[/message]
[message]
description=Betrayed Friend
- message= _ "Now is your chance Tallin. In your enslavement you have
learned a powerfull art so put it to good use. Let your fall become the means
by which you succeed."
- [/message]
-
- [message]
- description=Tallin
- message= _ "You mean, I should continue to practice this evil art?"
- [/message]
-
- [message]
- description=Betrayed Friend
- message= _ "Even the foulest of things can be put to good use Tallin.
Poison generally kills, but it can also be used to heal. In the same way,
although this art is usually practiced by the most power hungry, corrupt minded
persons, it still may be put to a good use. I believe your friend Abhai has
been trying to tell you this."
- [/message]
-
- [message]
- description=Tallin
- message= _ "Very well. If this be the will of the Great Gods then so be
it."
+ message= _ "Now is your chance, Tallin. In your enslavement you have
learned a powerful art; put it to good use. Let your fall become the means by
which you succeed."
+ [/message]
+
+ [message]
+ description=Tallin
+ message= _ "You mean, I should continue to practice the evil of
necromancy?"
+ [/message]
+
+ [message]
+ description=Betrayed Friend
+ message= _ "Even the foulest of weapons can be put to good use, Tallin.
Poison generally kills, but it can also be used to heal. In the same way,
although this art is usually practiced by the most power-hungry and corrupt, it
may still may turned to the ends of good by one with the strength of will and
soul-depth you have gained through your suffering."
+ [/message]
+
+ [message]
+ description=Tallin
+ message= _ "Very well. If this is the will of the Greater Gods then so
be it."
[/message]
[endlevel]
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