On Wed, 27 Jan 2010 02:49:15 +0100, <wha...@whatwg.org> wrote:

Author: ianh
Date: 2010-01-26 17:49:13 -0800 (Tue, 26 Jan 2010)
New Revision: 4627

Modified:
   complete.html
   index
   source
Log:
[e] (0) some editorial improvements to 'the indicated part...'


Modified: source
===================================================================
--- source      2010-01-24 11:34:30 UTC (rev 4626)
+++ source      2010-01-27 01:49:13 UTC (rev 4627)
@@ -64669,7 +64669,8 @@
   defined by the specification that defines the <span>MIME type</span>
   used by the <code>Document</code> (for example, the processing of
   fragment identifiers for <span title="XML MIME type">XML MIME
-  types</span> is the responsibility of RFC3023).</p>
+  types</span> is the responsibility of RFC3023). <a
+  href="#refsRFC3023">[RFC3023]</a></p>
  <p>For HTML documents (and <span title="HTML MIME type">HTML MIME
   types</span>), the following processing model must be followed to
@@ -64684,8 +64685,9 @@
    URL.</p></li><!-- parsing can't fail, since we checked earlier on
    when navigating -->
-   <li><p>If <var title="">fragid</var> is the empty string, then the
-   indicated part of the document is the top of the document.</p></li>
+   <li><p>If <var title="">fragid</var> is the empty string, then
+   <span>the indicated part of the document</span> is the top of the
+   document.</p></li>
   <li><p>Let <var title="">decoded fragid</var> be the result of
    expanding any sequences of percent-encoded octets in <var
@@ -64707,8 +64709,8 @@
    order is <span>the indicated part of the document</span>; stop the
    algorithm here.</p></li>

Here it should say somehting like "if fragid is "top" ascii case insensitively then the indicated part of the document is the top of the document".


-   <li><p>Otherwise, there is no indicated part of the
-   document.</p></li>
+   <li><p>Otherwise, there is no <span title="the indicated part of
+   the document">indicated part of the document</span>.</p></li>
  </ol>

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