5 die

            plunges 35
            5 through barrier
burns
   bizarre crash
                             rammed
                             tore
                             flew
                             bursting
                             plunged
       bodies beyond
       visual impossible


         trace found
         unknown details

                               haunted wonder
                                           where
                                           where
                                           whether
                                          whose
                                          when
                                          what
                                          witness watched


flying scene

busted

      plunging

traveling deadends

traveling through light
                                          witness
                                              watched
                                                      noted
                                                            reported

                              onlookers
                                brought flowers
                                     scream arrived
                                        faded flow
                                          vestiges along hole



remains

      charred

      charred

      charred

                     sifted through

                     dusty path

                      afternoon streaming

                                              horrific minds
                                                      end wonder
                                            traveling
                                             high speed
                                            traveling
                                              slow

                                              traveling
                                                 through light

zoomed fiery

   flying through

      barriers

           through deadends

                                                          visual road
                                                            flew
                                                                to haunting
end












From: Alan Sondheim <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Reply-To: "WRYTING-L : Writing and Theory across Disciplines"
<WRYTING-L@LISTSERV.UTORONTO.CA>
To: WRYTING-L@LISTSERV.UTORONTO.CA
Subject: Re: [_arc.hive_] script
Date: Fri, 7 Oct 2005 11:24:52 -0400

really like the 'I've lost it' refrain here. a lot of people, myself
included, have worked off of gaming - this refrain is really strong - I do
think it's a bit weakened by the gaming context, and I'd leave out the
other statements, inventory, etc. - alan


On Fri, 7 Oct 2005, Kamen Nedev wrote:

l

Pete wanders off into the Back of Mind screaming 'I've lost it, I've lost
it!!!'.
l

Tip of Tongue
A blue-painted room, bare of furniture, with a corridor leading east.

You can see Susan and Marvin here.



Pete strolls in from the Back of Mind and breaks out crying.

Marvin wanders off into the Back of Mind screaming 'I've lost it, I've
lost
it!!!'.

weather man strolls in from the Back of Mind and breaks out crying.

Ralph strolls in from the Back of Mind and breaks out crying.


Susan wanders off into the Back of Mind screaming 'I've lost it, I've lost
it!!!'.


Ralph wanders off into the Back of Mind screaming 'I've lost it, I've lost
it!!!'.
x me
As good-looking as ever.

talk

Ralph strolls in from the Back of Mind and breaks out crying.
talkt o marvin
That's not a verb I recognise.



George strolls in from the Back of Mind and breaks out crying.
talkt o marvin

George wanders off into the Back of Mind screaming 'I've lost it, I've
lost
it!!!'.
talkt o marvin

Ralph wanders off into the Back of Mind screaming 'I've lost it, I've lost
it!!!'.
talkt o marvin

Susan strolls in from the Back of Mind and breaks out crying.
talkt o marvin

weather man wanders off into the Back of Mind screaming 'I've lost it,
I've
lost it!!!'.
talkt o marvin
That's not a verb I recognise.



Susan wanders off into the Back of Mind screaming 'I've lost it, I've lost
it!!!'.


Pete wanders off into the Back of Mind screaming 'I've lost it, I've lost
it!!!'.


George strolls in from the Back of Mind and breaks out crying.

Ralph strolls in from the Back of Mind and breaks out crying.
e

Back of Mind
A red-painted room, bare of furniture, with a corridor leading west.

You can see Pete, Susan, weather man and Marvin here.



Ralph strolls in from the Tip of Tongue and breaks out crying.


Marvin wanders off into the Tip of Tongue screaming 'I've lost it, I've
lost
it!!!'.


weather man wanders off into the Tip of Tongue screaming 'I've lost it,
I've
lost it!!!'.


weather man strolls in from the Tip of Tongue and breaks out crying.
tree
compass (6)
the north wall
the south wall
the east wall
the west wall
the northeast wall
the northwest wall
the southeast wall
the southwest wall
the ceiling
the floor
the outside
the inside
Darkness (19)
(Inform Parser) (21)
(Inform Library) (22)
(LibraryMessages) (23)
Tip of Tongue (25)
Marvin
George
Back of Mind (29)
weather man
Ralph
yourself
Pete
Susan



Marvin strolls in from the Tip of Tongue and breaks out crying.
putloi

Susan wanders off into the Tip of Tongue screaming 'I've lost it, I've
lost
it!!!'.

George strolls in from the Tip of Tongue and breaks out crying.
purk

weather man wanders off into the Tip of Tongue screaming 'I've lost it,
I've
lost it!!!'.
purloi

weather man strolls in from the Tip of Tongue and breaks out crying.
purloin susan
You can't see any such thing.

purloin susan

Marvin wanders off into the Tip of Tongue screaming 'I've lost it, I've
lost
it!!!'.
purloin susa

Pete wanders off into the Tip of Tongue screaming 'I've lost it, I've lost
it!!!'.

weather man wanders off into the Tip of Tongue screaming 'I've lost it,
I've
lost it!!!'.
purloin Susan
You can't see any such thing.



weather man strolls in from the Tip of Tongue and breaks out crying.

George wanders off into the Tip of Tongue screaming 'I've lost it, I've
lost
it!!!'.
purloin S

Susan strolls in from the Tip of Tongue and breaks out crying.
purloin M

Ralph wanders off into the Tip of Tongue screaming 'I've lost it, I've
lost
it!!!'.
purloin Marvin
You can't see any such thing.



Pete strolls in from the Tip of Tongue and breaks out crying.


Marvin strolls in from the Tip of Tongue and breaks out crying.
purloin light
You can't see any such thing.



Pete wanders off into the Tip of Tongue screaming 'I've lost it, I've lost
it!!!'.


Pete strolls in from the Tip of Tongue and breaks out crying.
q
Are you sure you want to quit? y


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