[EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
Yelp
Yelp
for a
thigh
rinse
I cringed
Oh
me!
spree
shot
stormy
plopping
paginate my
ass cheeks
paginate
my balls
I luggage I angle I fin
I blister I cramp I corn
I clam I spore I trance
I finger I dung I throat
I mud I wind I behind
I i
shore
,ah
you
lubes ,
craze
core
my rump
drug me
scumbags
anus
skin and lout
the creamed
gash -- puke wince --
blundered stomach
what
what
what
what
--Bob BrueckL
(words appropriated from
John M. Bennett poems)
I like the short lines, different (so far as I know) from your usual.
and even tho you derive this from John's work, the vocabulary is
distinctly yours.
Allen
