thanks John. I've been reading Alice Notley a little to see if maybe something might rub off on me.. it was like a little voice i almost missed while i was coming up the stairs from the fab to do my passdown and i just hung on to the first line until i could sit down. there's something really melancholy about an evening commute along the columbia river, not a single evening commute but years of it. it has a rhythm, it makes me think of 'naturalism' or something. contemporary naturalism? in a 19C way? not sure.. they play such obscure music. Hue? pronounced Uuhr? thx John.
----- Original Message ----- From: John M. Bennett To: WRYTING-L@LISTSERV.WVU.EDU Sent: Friday, December 01, 2006 6:27 AM Subject: Re: an early draft great lyric poem, Lanny! john At 08:23 AM 12/1/2006, you wrote: i guess i'm driving and the wipers are a single needle registering a guage in a focus test. sometime ago, i looked for a way to tell you about my self, but dusk has a wide and rigid girth which plummets, which rises to the fall, nothing witty to the oak's accidental ab. a translation to miracle, from miracle, and somewhere along the river the same standard circus is telling the children if they can cry. i'm not. i'm not. i guess i'm driving somewhere. and. what seems like the right angle (loser), ends up being a tactic (silence) to the trans-dimensional. scissors for a turtle. calm for an ~ -- BEGIN-ANTISPAM-VOTING-LINKS ------------------------------------------------------ Teach CanIt if this mail (ID 153589156) is spam: Spam: https://antispam.osu.edu/b.php?c=s&i=153589156&m=076189da8e86 Not spam: https://antispam.osu.edu/b.php?c=n&i=153589156&m=076189da8e86 Forget vote: https://antispam.osu.edu/b.php?c=f&i=153589156&m=076189da8e86 ------------------------------------------------------ END-ANTISPAM-VOTING-LINKS __________________________________________ Dr. John M. Bennett Curator, Avant Writing Collection Rare Books & Manuscripts Library The Ohio State University Libraries 1858 Neil Av Mall Columbus, OH 43210 USA (614) 292-3029 [EMAIL PROTECTED] www.johnmbennett.net http://www.library.osu.edu/sites/rarebooks/avantwriting/ ___________________________________________