Editorial comments:
suggestwhen to use the longdesc attribute to provide ore detail -> suggest when
to use the longdesc attribute to provide more detail
Attributes are plain text and connot contain sub-elements -> Attributes are
plain text and cannot contain sub-elements
or if image disaply is disabled, -> or if image display is disabled,
Text that is for use as an alternatve to an image -> Text that is for use as an
alternative to an image
It is often possible to represent charts, diagrams and other explanitory sorts
of picture using SVG. ->
It is often possible to represent charts, diagrams and other
explanatory sorts of picture using SVG.
This does not automatically make such pictures be accessbible, but different
mechanisms then befomre available for embedding text alternatives in the SVG
images. ->
This does not automatically make such pictures be accessible, but
different mechanisms then before are available for embedding text alternatives
in the SVG images.
only the first image should normally have explanitory text, -> only the first
image should normally have explanatory text,
An image description in this context is text, whether embedded in the main
document or elsewhere, that would enable a reader ->
An image description in this context is text, whether embedded in
the main document or elsewhere which would enable a reader
that the items in a bar chart are borizontal rows -> that the items in a bar
chart are horizontal rows
The first a picture -> The first is a picture
Depending on the context in which the illustation -> Depending on the context
in which the illustration
even that the edges of the printng-block -> even that the edges of the
printing-block
Although the alt attribute is essental -> Although the alt attribute is
essential
An image of a painting inspired by a poem, on a page reciting that poem. ->
<Change to be a proper sentence>
which makes sense in the context of the sentence it is apart of. -> which makes
sense in the context of the sentence it is a part of.
as per the relevant relevant guidance -> as per the relevant guidance
is given an an empty alt attribute -> is given an empty alt attribute
When an image is decorative and it is the author's intent that it not convey
any information -> When an image is decorative and it is the author's intent
that it not conveys any information
When an image is immediately proceeded or preceded by a text alternative ->
When an image is immediately preceded by a text alternative
represented by a real unicode character, the recommended practice is to remove
the gaiji image and just use the unicode character. ->
represented by a real Unicode character, the recommended practice is to remove
the gaiji image and just use the Unicode character.
(Make the change to "Unicode" globally)
/paulc
Paul Cotton, Microsoft Canada
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