Hi, I corrected the doc already but I kind off forget to answer back you guys back, thank you for the review!
@marr, it's always nice to see new people, I'm sure we all are happy to know you like the desktop :) Kind Regards Mike 2010/10/10 Marr <[email protected]>: > On Sunday 10 October 2010 09:01:53 Mike Massonnet wrote: >> I wrote a short user documentation for the task manager and since my >> english is not native I had like to receive some reviewers. > > Hi Mike, > > As a humble recent convert to Xfce, first let me say "Thank you!" to you and > all the other maintainers and developers for all your work on this great > project! It is very much appreciated by myself and (undoubtedly) countless > other mailing list lurkers like me. > > After a quick review of your documentation, I'd suggest these small changes in > addition to the ones already mentioned by Christian Dywan: > > (1) "The information about the processes are presented on multiple columns." > > This should say "in multiple columns". > > (2) "When right clicking a task it is possible" > > A comma should be used after "task". > > (3) "The higher the priority of a process the more it will be privileged" > > A comma should be used after "process". > > (4) "The task scheduler selects continuously processes to be executed on one > CPU core." > > I would swap the words "selects" and "continuously", which reads more > naturally in English. In other words, it sounds better as "The task scheduler > continuously selects processes (...)". > > (5) "Show percentage values for example for memory and CPU with decimals for > more precision." > > This reads a bit clumsily. Maybe something like "Show percentage values (e.g. > for memory and CPU) with decimals for more precision." would be better? > > (6) "When closing the window hide the application inside the notification > area." > > A comma should be used after "window". > > (7) "This option also activate the icon within the notification area." > > Change "activate" to "activates". > > Hope my comments are useful.... Thanks again for all your efforts! > > Regards, > Bill Marr > -- Mike _______________________________________________ Xfce-i18n mailing list [email protected] http://foo-projects.org/mailman/listinfo/xfce-i18n
