On Fri, Apr 18, 2008 at 3:49 PM, George Brooke
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> On Thu, 17 Apr 2008 11:00:10 +0530
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> "Ashok Gautham" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
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>  While I like the 'banners' that you have made they seem to me to be
>  more posters so I have made an alternative which would fit in the same
>  space as the gutsy banner which started this.
>  http://solar-george.selfip.org:1000/heron.png
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>  solar.george
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Hi George,

The banner is not bad; here are a few suggestions how you can improve
it. "Hardy Heron 8.04" is a logical unit that has to be expressed
visually as well. Group them tightly. The "has landed" less important
and this fact also has to be expressed visually; perhaps with a
smaller and different typefaces; you can also emphasize this by
separating off from the center of interest. Something like the
following sketch.

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/9091/hardyreleasekz6.png

jmak

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