Hey Luca, On 06/19/2012 02:38 PM, Luca Manlio De Lisi wrote: > Hi Pasi! > > I've found into the target page and paragraph, at the end of second > section, instead of "but due to the ease of use it is a good option > for these users too" I think that could be better to write something > like "according to this ease of use, it's a good alternative for those > users".
Others, feedback? > Always in that page, at focus introduction paragraph I've got the > feeling that we've forgot some commas, I think it should be "he > specifications in the strategy document should not be confused with > release specific goals and priorities, but instead recognized as the > principles which the release specific goals are based on". I think this is fine as it is. > In the Community page, at "Becoming and staying a member" paragraph, I > think there's a verbal mistake (I've to admit that I've some doubts if > I've understood the page): "To be accepted to this team, *one must > demonstrate their* motivation and ability to contribute to Xubuntu", > singular person with plural verb? I'm wrong or it better be "one must > demonstrate his/hers motivation"? In the same paragraph, I believe > that "However, if the break is to last longer than a cycle, or the > contributor is unsure if they will contribute at all in the future, it > is encouraged to leave the team and reapply at a later time" could > sound better as "However, if the break lasts longer than a cycle, or > the contributor is unsure if he/her will contribute anymore, etc etc". This is "by design", so won't fix. > > At the moment, that's where I can check due to other things I've to > do! You'll receive a mail if I've some other purposes or maybe not! Thanks! Pasi -- Pasi Lallinaho (knome) » http://open.knome.fi/ Leader of Shimmer Project and Xubuntu » http://shimmerproject.org/ Graphic artist, webdesigner, Ubuntu member » http://xubuntu.org/
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