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Dian Fu commented on YARN-4100:
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Hi [~Naganarasimha],
Thanks a lot for patch. LGTM. Just a few minor comments:
* {{Script}} should be {{script}}.
* {{NM will send its loaded labels every x intervals configured along with 
heartbeat from NM to RM.}} can be changed to {{NM will send its loaded labels 
every x intervals configured along with heartbeat to RM.}}. 
* {quote}
By default 2 implementations are supported, Script and Configuration based
  {quote}
What about {{By default 2 implementations are supported: Script based and 
Configuration based}}?
* {quote}
In case of Script,......In case of config,
 {quote}
The capital of {{script}} and {{config}} should be consistent.
* {{This would helpfull}} can be changed to {{This would be helpfull}}
* {quote}"delegated-centralized" needs to be set, to fetch the labels from a 
interface in RM.}} {quote}
The comma can be removed.
* {quote} When "yarn.node-labels.configuration-type" parameter in RM is 
configured as "distributed", {quote}
What about changed to {{When "yarn.node-labels.configuration-type" is 
configured with "distributed"}}
* {quote}If "config" is specified then "ConfigurationNodeLabelsProvider" and 
"script" then "ScriptNodeLabelsProvider" will be used.{quote}
What about changed to {{If "config" is configured, then 
"ConfigurationNodeLabelsProvider" will be used and if "script" is configured, 
then "ScriptNodeLabelsProvider" will be used.}}
* {quote}admin might have removed the cluster label which was provided NM{quote}
Missed one word {{by}} between {{provided}} and {{NM}}.
* {quote} This configuration is to define the interval period.If -1 is 
configured{quote}
Missed one white space before {{If}}.
* {{When....then}}, {{If...then}}
I think there should be one comma before then.
* {{will be considered for Node Labels.}}
Seems that it should be {{will be considered as Node Labels.}}
* {{ In case of multiple lines having the pattern, last one will be 
considered.}}
What about {{In case that multiple lines have this pattern, the last line will 
be considered.}}

> Add Documentation for Distributed and Delegated-Centralized Node Labels 
> feature
> -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: YARN-4100
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/YARN-4100
>             Project: Hadoop YARN
>          Issue Type: Sub-task
>          Components: api, client, resourcemanager
>            Reporter: Naganarasimha G R
>            Assignee: Naganarasimha G R
>         Attachments: NodeLabel.html, YARN-4100.v1.001.patch
>
>
> Add Documentation for Distributed Node Labels feature



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