Hello Ankur,
Yes, you are right, i may write a better one on the same topic since 
there is always room for improvement...but i kind of like this one. 
As for "filled with what"...there is an interesting proverb in 
Punjabi which might explain what its filled with.I hope its legible 
in english,
   "Sir ai kay tobhara ai?"..."Sir" is the punjabi word for head.The 
word "tobhara" stands for "the broken lower half of a water pot
(Matka)".The kind which is made of clay and used commonly in 
villages.Since the broken half is useless for carrying water, people 
often use it as a dustbin i.e. they put all the trash in it.

In English the proverb would go somewhat like this "Is that a head on 
your shoulders or a Trashcan?"

Now this proverb is often used for those who refuse to use their 
heads when there is need of it,yet still persist in thinking of 
themselves as someone very special.Most snobs are like that...their 
heads are so full of nonsense and trash concerning their own selves 
that it becomes a "tobhara".And funnily enough most snobs think its a 
very special tobhara, so they hold it high for all to see...

I hope you understand the explanation i've given.
Thankyou,
Farah.



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> Nice one, but filled with what? Think on this. You might write a 
better one on the same topic. 
> Ankur.
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> Farah <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> A funny, moody poem.      
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>      SNOBS
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> They walk upon the earth,
> With heads held so high with pride...
> As if they are bowls
> Filled up to the brim
> If tilted a bit
> Will spill !!!
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> Farah(1998)
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