Hi!

I really am interested in poetry.....and yet being a beginner its hard
to be able to appreciate the finer points of a poem - some critical
appreciation from other members of a poem will surely help :))

Cheers!
AT


My Intro (once again!)

A new start

A tiny fish that forgot to swim,
Dormant.....listless....almost as if cursed,
Finally shakes from its self imposed stupor
Or it would have died of thirst

Away from the waves, the bubbles, the dreams
How long could it really stay?
For the waves that stirred the waters of its heart
Had to see the light of day....

That tiny fish who got lost somewhere
Worn out by time, bound painfully by worldly rule
Now seeks to break free, to swim again
Now seeks to join the school


-- 
"Life is either a daring adventure or nothing" - Helen Keller





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