Hello Ronnie! Thankyou so much for such nice praise :-)) Hmm, that's a unique idea. I will need to think about it... Oh and i liked your poem "Lust" so much that i showed it to my little sister. She in turn like it so much that she went ahead and posted it on her college community. I hope its not too late to ask for your permission?...i learned of this only recently...
--- In [email protected], ronnie banerjee <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Hi Farah! ur poem could end with the second stanza. It is devastating till then and an abrupt end shall make it spell binding. > With lots of affection, I must say that a poem or a good idea needs the least of words and should end at the height of its powers.Like the retirement of a famous sportsperson... > > blu doll <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > I Am > your hope > your dreams > your aspirations. > Pray, > do not forget > i am me > I am > God's creation. > ~Suchitra Sen Joshi~ > Farah <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > SELF-ACTUALIZATION > > I am not such a pleasent person; > Not deep down inside. > My exterior is a mirage, > My interior a void... > > I am, > An echo; > Loud and empty. > An inconcrete reflection, > Of a long lost voice. > > An abandoned shell; > Glossy outside. > And the noise of the sea, > Encapsuled within > Is merely that > A Noise! > > Farah (30th June, 2005) > > > --- In [email protected], Albert Krishna Ali <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > wrote: > > I am > > > > the moment > > at the end > > of each exhaled breath > > before the next > > > > the note > > which by it's absence > > creates harmony > > in Mozart's symphony > > > > the word > > the poet never found > > that gave meaning > > to his poetry > > > > the thought > > that arose > > before I began > > to think > > > > the void > > that lives > > where the infinite > > embraces the finite > > > > I am > > > > that > > > > > > shekhar > > http://www.shekharkapur.com/blog/archives/2005/08/i_am.htm#more > > > > > --------------------------------- > Yahoo! India Matrimony: Find your partner now. > > -- > You are encouraged to post poetry, respond critically to the poems circulated and participate in discussions. To post, email your message to [email protected] OR post online at http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTPoets/post/ > > Tell friends to subscribe to ZESTPoets by sending a blank email to [EMAIL PROTECTED], OR, if they have a Yahoo! ID, by visiting http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTPoets/join/ > > > > ---theZESTcommunity-------------- > > [1] ZESTCurrent: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTCurrent/ > [2] ZESTEconomics: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTEconomics/ > [3] ZESTGlobal: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTGlobal/ > [4] ZESTMedia: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTMedia/ > [5] ZESTPoets: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTPoets/ > [6] ZESTCaste: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTCaste/ > [7] ZESTAlternative: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTAlternative/ > [8] TalkZEST: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/TalkZEST/ > --- > > > > SPONSORED LINKS > Book writing software Business writing book Writing book Writing child book Writing and publishing a book Writing poetry > > --------------------------------- > YAHOO! GROUPS LINKS > > > Visit your group "ZESTPoets" on the web. > > To unsubscribe from this group, send an email to: > [EMAIL PROTECTED] > > Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to the Yahoo! Terms of Service. > > > --------------------------------- > > > > > --------------------------------- > Yahoo! India Matrimony: Find your partner now. ------------------------ Yahoo! Groups Sponsor --------------------~--> Get fast access to your favorite Yahoo! Groups. Make Yahoo! your home page http://us.click.yahoo.com/dpRU5A/wUILAA/yQLSAA/yqIolB/TM --------------------------------------------------------------------~-> -- You are encouraged to post poetry, respond critically to the poems circulated and participate in discussions. To post, email your message to [email protected] OR post online at http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTPoets/post/ Tell friends to subscribe to ZESTPoets by sending a blank email to [EMAIL PROTECTED], OR, if they have a Yahoo! ID, by visiting http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTPoets/join/ ---theZESTcommunity-------------- [1] ZESTCurrent: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTCurrent/ [2] ZESTEconomics: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTEconomics/ [3] ZESTGlobal: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTGlobal/ [4] ZESTMedia: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTMedia/ [5] ZESTPoets: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTPoets/ [6] ZESTCaste: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTCaste/ [7] ZESTAlternative: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTAlternative/ [8] TalkZEST: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/TalkZEST/ --- Yahoo! Groups Links <*> To visit your group on the web, go to: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTPoets/ <*> To unsubscribe from this group, send an email to: [EMAIL PROTECTED] <*> Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to: http://docs.yahoo.com/info/terms/
