Hi Ankur, 

Your cousin was right. It is the sudden increase in atmospheric 
pressure. It's the same thing one experiences when flying. Some 
people, when travelling up a slope also get nose bleeds and feel 
giddy. 
Here's a poem I wrote on giddiness as an excercise: 

AFTER THE THIRD ROUND!

Unmoving motion
round and round
the unmerry-go-round
earth is sky
sky the river
milk white river
I spout a fountain
heaving gut and gizzard
mind circles 
a troubled eagle
body swoops to meet
cold ground
round and round
steady there now
the firmament stops
anon...


Mountains have a way of remaining with you even when you have moved 
far away from them. They are also a great source of creative 
inspiration. Me, I prefer mountains, anyday over the plains.

Rumjhum

> On Tue, 24 Jan 2006 ankur prahlad wrote :
> >Thanks for the nice words abt the poem Rumjhum. My visit to naini 
was an amazing experience. On our way back from naini, sitting in 
the car I began to feel dizzy and sick. I couldnt hear anything and 
my ears were sorta blocked. Initially I thought it was coz of the 
cold mountain winds and closed all the windows but later my cousin 
told it was coz of the sudden increase in the atmospheric pressure 
that I experienced descending down the hills. I dont know what the 
actual reason is but that experience led to a sorta existential 
realization: that all that I had seen heard and experienced would be 
nothing if I die, and the feeling of sickness and breathlessness was 
so bad that I actually thought I would die.
> >   On reaching kathgodam I drank some coffee and recovered but I 
was wondering whether there was any way of containing what I had 
seen in the form of words, whether there was any way of leaving 
behind what I had experienced. As I had more than one and a half 
hour to spare before the train could leave I took my notepad and the 
poem happened.
> >   Now I am in Bangalore and deeply miss the sense of peace and 
calm that I felt there. The feeling of wholesomeness as you have 
aptly put is no more. I wonder why..
> >
> >   Ankur
> >
> >   ymursawsib <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> >   Your poem brought back memories of my brief stopover at 
Kathgodam. We
> >were on our way to Ranikhet and Nainital. It was early spring, 
and on
> >the road to Kathgodam we same some jungle fowl. The name, of this
> >foothill town, itself is so evocative. You get a sense of
> >wholesomeness. That is there in your poem.
> >
> >And, now going through the lines of your poem again, I can see 
that
> >station, the steam engines, don't know whether they are still 
there or
> >not, the smell of crisp woody air, and the feeling of time pouring
> >endlessly -  as you put it so beautifully from "the huge tap of 
time".
> >
> >Thank you, Ankur.
> >
> >:-) Rumjhum
> >
> >
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