The glossary entry has historically been included separately on this page. When I last suggested changes for the page, it didn't occur to me to remove that separate section and incorporate references to them (there are two glossaries: one in the Guide, and the one on the wiki, each with slightly didn't vintage) in other locations.
Incorporating these references into other sections makes sense to me. It simplifies the main page structure a little, and reflects the fact that the glossaries are part of the Guide and wiki, respectively. I'll look into a rewrite, and send it in for adjustment in the next few days. David T. On August 18, 2018, at 7:15 AM, Adrien Monteleone <adrien.montele...@lusfiber.net> wrote: In combination with making the T&CG glossary sentence a part the Official documentation paragraph, I think the second sentence should be moved down to the Developer Documentation paragraph. Also, the following line needs a number correction: "The Documentation page on the gnucash.org website also contains ~~this~~ _these_ documents in” I’d do either myself, but I see the main page is above my pay grade. (I’m sure for very good reason) Regards, Adrien > On Aug 18, 2018, at 8:53 AM, John Ralls <jra...@ceridwen.us> wrote: > > > >> On Aug 17, 2018, at 11:45 PM, David T. via gnucash-devel >> <gnucash-devel@gnucash.org> wrote: >> >> >> >>> On Aug 17, 2018, at 11:29 AM, Frank H. Ellenberger >>> <frank.h.ellenber...@gmail.com> wrote: >>> >>> Am 16.08.2018 um 20:37 schrieb David T. via gnucash-devel: >>>> Hello, >>>> >>>> I was reviewing the Wiki today to try to figure out where a page on the >>>> SQL formats might get attached, and I noticed a change to the Glossary >>>> section that makes for awkward English. >>>> >>>> As currently entered, the section reads: >>>> >>>> Above GnuCash Tutorial and Concepts Guide includes a comprehensive >>>> Glossary: >>>> [https://www.gnucash.org/docs/v2.6/C/gnucash-guide/gnc-gloss.html >>>> Released] or [https://code.gnucash.org/docs/C/gnucash-guide/gnc-gloss.html >>>> Maintainer] version. >>>> >>>> However, it used to say: >>>> >>>> The GnuCash Tutorial and Concepts Guide includes a comprehensive Glossary: >>>> [https://www.gnucash.org/docs/v2.6/C/gnucash-guide/gnc-gloss.html >>>> Released] or [https://code.gnucash.org/docs/C/gnucash-guide/gnc-gloss.html >>>> Maintainer] version. >>>> >>>> I would like to ask that someone with edit permissions on the wiki home >>>> page to please change the word “Above” back to “The” to make the section >>>> read more idiomatically. >>>> >>>> David T. >>> >>> IMHO it is also bad style to have: >>> The Tutorial and Concepts Guide - an in-depth guide to the concepts. >>> : >>> The GnuCash Tutorial and Concepts Guide includes a comprehensive >>> Glossary: Released or Maintainer version. >>> >> >> We differ in our opinion here. I stand by my recommendation. > > And you’re both right, it needs a more thorough rewrite to flow better. Since > the glossary isn’t a stand-alone document it shouldn’t have its own level-two > header. An additional sentence in the T&CG paragraph under Official > Documentation would be better. On the other hand the wiki needs more > prominence, there’s a whole lot more information there than just the FAQ and > technical glossary. > > Regards, > John Ralls > > _______________________________________________ > gnucash-devel mailing list > gnucash-devel@gnucash.org > https://lists.gnucash.org/mailman/listinfo/gnucash-devel _______________________________________________ gnucash-devel mailing list gnucash-devel@gnucash.org https://lists.gnucash.org/mailman/listinfo/gnucash-devel _______________________________________________ gnucash-devel mailing list gnucash-devel@gnucash.org https://lists.gnucash.org/mailman/listinfo/gnucash-devel
