Much better.

Regards,
Adrien

> On Aug 20, 2018, at 8:57 AM, David T. <sunfis...@yahoo.com> wrote:
> 
> OK. I have looked over this issue with an eye to clarifying the text, and I 
> believe that the User Documentation section should be simplified. As 
> currently written, as you all have noted, the User Documentation section 
> includes different layers of content, presented at the same tier of coverage. 
> Thus, the Help and Tutorial are presented alongside two wiki pages and two 
> glossaries. That’s inconsistent. 
> 
> So, first up is to level things off. That means eliminating the separate 
> headings for the Glossaries, the FAQ and Using Gnucash, and changing the main 
> section to refer to the wiki at the same level as the Help and Tutorial. In 
> the interest of helping people in dire need, I choose to retain the 
> references to the FAQ and Using GnuCash pages, but as a descriptive list 
> under the wiki in general (I will note that I also changed the Getting Help 
> page to parallel this approach). As suggested, mention of the Glossaries 
> isn’t particularly appropriate here, so I remove it altogether. [FWIW, I 
> think the proper approach would be to make sure that all uses of special 
> terminology in the wiki and the documentation receive reference to their 
> glossary definitions, ideally as tool tips—but that solution is beyond my 
> ability]
> 
> I also don’t like “User Documentation” since we aren’t documenting users, so 
> I prefer “Documentation for Users”, which requires the following heading to 
> be changed to “Documentation for Developers”
> 
> Here is my final suggestion for the section in question:
> 
> === Documentation for Users ===
> GnuCash offers two major pieces of documentation: 
> * [http://www.gnucash.org/viewdoc.phtml?doc=help The Help Manual] - a quick 
> reference manual for specific tasks, and
> * [http://www.gnucash.org/viewdoc.phtml?doc=guide The Tutorial and Concepts 
> Guide] - an in-depth guide to the concepts. It is highly recommended to read 
> at least the first chapters of the guide.
> The [http://www.gnucash.org/docs.phtml Documentation page on the gnucash.org 
> ''website''] also contains these documents in
> * '''other languages:''' de, it, ja, pt; 
> * '''other formats:''' ''PDF'', ''ePub'' or ''mobi''; as well as
> * '''other releases:''' nightly (unstable),  previous and earlier stable 
> releases.
> The GnuCash wiki includes extensive information regarding all aspects of 
> GnuCash, contributed by the developers and users of GnuCash. Information in 
> the wiki covers a broad variety of topics, and includes detailed technical 
> information, as well as information that applies to specific use cases. Of 
> particular interest on the wiki are: 
> * The [[FAQ|GnuCash FAQ]], which contains a collection of frequently asked 
> questions about GnuCash, including administration, accounting, and glossary 
> questions, and
> * [[Using GnuCash]], which collects real life experiences using GnuCash. You 
> may find (user) solutions here that are not covered by the documentation.
> 
> === Documentation for Developers ===
> 
> 
>> On Aug 18, 2018, at 8:53 AM, D via gnucash-devel <gnucash-devel@gnucash.org> 
>> wrote:
>> 
>> The glossary entry has historically been included separately on this page. 
>> When I last suggested changes for the page, it didn't occur to me to remove 
>> that separate section and incorporate references to them (there are two 
>> glossaries: one in the Guide, and the one on the wiki, each with slightly 
>> didn't vintage) in other locations.
>> 
>> Incorporating these references into other sections makes sense to me. It 
>> simplifies the main page structure a little, and reflects the fact that the 
>> glossaries are part of the Guide and wiki, respectively.
>> 
>> I'll look into a rewrite, and send it in for adjustment in the next few days.
>> 
>> David T.
>> 
>> On August 18, 2018, at 7:15 AM, Adrien Monteleone 
>> <adrien.montele...@lusfiber.net> wrote:
>> 
>> In combination with making the T&CG glossary sentence a part the Official 
>> documentation paragraph, I think the second sentence should be moved down to 
>> the Developer Documentation paragraph.
>> 
>> Also, the following line needs a number correction:
>> 
>> "The Documentation page on the gnucash.org website also contains ~~this~~ 
>> _these_ documents in”
>> 
>> I’d do either myself, but I see the main page is above my pay grade. (I’m 
>> sure for very good reason)
>> 
>> Regards,
>> Adrien
>> 
>>> On Aug 18, 2018, at 8:53 AM, John Ralls <jra...@ceridwen.us> wrote:
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>>> On Aug 17, 2018, at 11:45 PM, David T. via gnucash-devel 
>>>> <gnucash-devel@gnucash.org> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>>> On Aug 17, 2018, at 11:29 AM, Frank H. Ellenberger 
>>>>> <frank.h.ellenber...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Am 16.08.2018 um 20:37 schrieb David T. via gnucash-devel:
>>>>>> Hello,
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> I was reviewing the Wiki today to try to figure out where a page on the 
>>>>>> SQL formats might get attached, and I noticed a change to the Glossary 
>>>>>> section that makes for awkward English.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> As currently entered, the section reads:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Above GnuCash Tutorial and Concepts Guide includes a comprehensive 
>>>>>> Glossary: 
>>>>>> [https://www.gnucash.org/docs/v2.6/C/gnucash-guide/gnc-gloss.html 
>>>>>> Released] or 
>>>>>> [https://code.gnucash.org/docs/C/gnucash-guide/gnc-gloss.html 
>>>>>> Maintainer] version.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> However, it used to say:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> The GnuCash Tutorial and Concepts Guide includes a comprehensive 
>>>>>> Glossary: 
>>>>>> [https://www.gnucash.org/docs/v2.6/C/gnucash-guide/gnc-gloss.html 
>>>>>> Released] or 
>>>>>> [https://code.gnucash.org/docs/C/gnucash-guide/gnc-gloss.html 
>>>>>> Maintainer] version.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> I would like to ask that someone with edit permissions on the wiki home 
>>>>>> page to please change the word “Above” back to “The” to make the section 
>>>>>> read more idiomatically.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> David T.
>>>>> 
>>>>> IMHO it is also bad style to have:
>>>>> The Tutorial and Concepts Guide - an in-depth guide to the concepts.
>>>>> :
>>>>> The GnuCash Tutorial and Concepts Guide includes a comprehensive
>>>>> Glossary: Released or Maintainer version.
>>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> We differ in our opinion here. I stand by my recommendation.
>>> 
>>> And you’re both right, it needs a more thorough rewrite to flow better. 
>>> Since the glossary isn’t a stand-alone document it shouldn’t have its own 
>>> level-two header. An additional sentence in the T&CG paragraph under 
>>> Official Documentation would be better. On the other hand the wiki needs 
>>> more prominence, there’s a whole lot more information there than just the 
>>> FAQ and technical glossary.
>>> 
>>> Regards,
>>> John Ralls
>>> 
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