Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <evyn...@cisco.com> wrote:
    > As the text has changed a lot, not so much on the technical content but
    > more or completeness and readability, I will re-submit it to another
    > IESG evaluation early January in the hope that the IESG will approve
    > this draft.

Thank you.

    > May I kindly request the authors to fix the idnits issues ?
    > 
https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-24.txt
    > it is about a reference to RFC 6125 or its -bis and the use of
    > obsoleted RFC 5077.

The text says:

   The HNA will validate the DM's control channel certificate by doing
   [RFC6125]/[I-D.ietf-uta-rfc6125bis] DNS-ID check on the name.

The word "an" ought to be in front of [RFC6125].
I think that idnits is confused.

I thought the UTA document was just a patch on RFC6125, but I see that it's a
complete replacement, so referencing both makes less sense.

As for RFC5077. I have replaced it with RFC8446 (TLS1.3), section 4.6.1, but
the reference feels less useful now.


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Michael Richardson <mcr+i...@sandelman.ca>   . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting )
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